A Short Passage

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Here is a short passage that I wrote when I was bored and at the same time was listening to the news:

Tamara slid her ebony colored hands over her satin rose dress. She stood in front of the mirror and examined herself. Her curves, bust and well tones thighs. Frowning she picked a dark haired strand out of her eyes and sighed. “Tonight Caesar is

Comments

[stargirl1313]

*PRAISE*
well done, you took the words right out of my mouth darling. so true, so true. yet, so sad.

<3

nice!

[kowaretanainiji]

I like it!
I like it as is, i don't think it needs a full story.
It is short and to the point.
Although i can't help but wonder what the pills are...

[bleedmylove]

I love the way you always create such detailed imagery.
And, I love how you carefully hid messages in the story, how society only accepts the perfect image, but it makes America seem so perfect even though there are dirty secrets hidden within.
I loved it.

Megan (from 6th grade?)

[anonymous]

hello there. i came across your journal again and read this. Very good. It has so much meaning behind it...you're brilliant. <3