030 - Writings

[my_green_pen]

Well I have this writing class in my homebound thingy. And we had to write opening sentences for books and stuff and we had to make up our own. And I made up two pretty good ones that I think I might want to turn into a story/book or something. So here they are tell me what you think please.

“Get me out of here!” She said as they locked her in

Comments

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The first one definately caught my attention.

[my_green_pen]

Me too. Thanx

[rustedxemotions]

ooh, the first one = &hearts + eye-catching
the second one = &hearts

love 'em!

[my_green_pen]

gracias again

♥