Syntax (More or Less)

[my_hippo]

The prompt I chose was to write in the style of a Ted Kooser poem, therefore, no verbs.
In theory... if it looks like a verb, sounds like a verb, diagrams like a verb, it isn't a verb.

Then again, you know what they say about theories...

Thoughts on the BrainOf sinews of impetuous

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A Box of Pastels

[relativism]

I once held on my knees a simple wooden box
in which a rainbow lay dusty and broken.
It was a set of pastels that had years before
belonged to the painter Mary Cassatt,
and all of the colors she'd used in her work
lay open before me. Those hues she'd most used,
the peaches and pinks, were worn down to stubs,
while the cool colors -- violet, ultramarine --
had been set, scarcely touched, to one side.
She'd had little patience with darkness, and her heart
held only a measure of shadow. I touched
the warm dust of those colors, her tools,
and left there with light on the tips of my fingers.

(He came to Western last year like a much needed miracle.)