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my_jungsoo

009 - 83 hearts. Chapter 2 - Why I Like You

Mar 20, 2009 02:06

Part 2. Yeah yeah! I'm really addicted to Teukchul right now but I think this story is pretty much nothing compared to the others you read. Oh well, this is the second part of the story called "Hearts." Chapter 1 was posted before this.

Title: 83 hearts.
Pairing: Leeteuk x Heechul
Rating: PG-15
Point of View: Leeteuk
Mentions: Yesung, Donghae, ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

10tookie24 March 19 2009, 18:30:53 UTC

OMG!OMG!OMG!
Its 2 am and I'm up reading this!
Holy shit it's so good! TT *cries from total amazement*
I'm all jelly-like and almost melting right now!
CAN'T wait for the next one!XD

my_jungsoo March 20 2009, 04:16:26 UTC

weeeeeeeeee..thank you so much..and you're so cute..

dongbangsuju20 March 19 2009, 22:34:34 UTC

ah you made is soooo good xx
the beginning was a bit. i don't know.. not SUCH good..
but then <33
and you manage to put them all in a way together that they are still in-character.. which i think is really difficult (maybe just for me?! XD)
and how you described the kissing and feelings of teukie is just love <3
actually i don't like the first person point of view not this much..
but you do this really good!!
<3

ah and btw:
why did i imagine the next chapter "angela" with a smut scene, but from heechul's point of view?!
maybe i should write it.. if this weren't your idea?! xD

my_jungsoo March 20 2009, 04:17:39 UTC

thank you for being so honest..i really respect that..and i didn't know a lot of people like a smut scene..haha..i'm trying to keep it PG but who knows? right? lol

yesunglover March 20 2009, 01:16:24 UTC

“You’re so predictable.” He said. “I can control you in the palm of my hand. You’re so fragile yet so insanely beautiful. Your innocent soul is what I want, and is what I dreamt of. I like you hyung. I really really like you. I like you more than anyone that I’m willing to kiss you again.”

I don't know why but this whole sentence made me swoon!

Hope you'll update soon ^ ^

my_jungsoo March 20 2009, 04:14:12 UTC

oh thank you so much..and i will update soon..i'll try my best

shinelikethesky March 20 2009, 02:05:39 UTC

“Was this just a practice for your next kissing game for our next Super show?”

I love that line.
<3

my_jungsoo March 20 2009, 04:13:27 UTC

thank you..I was supposed to say SM town concert but ended up using super show..lol

emi84 March 20 2009, 03:57:18 UTC

"I can control you in the palm of my hand. You’re so fragile yet so insanely beautiful. Your innocent soul is what I want, and is what I dream of. "

Awwwww that is so sweet and yet beautiful..

I'm sure many will love this too.

my_jungsoo March 20 2009, 04:05:15 UTC

thank you so much..glad you find it sweet.