Comments | my_jungsoo: 017 - 83 hearts. Chapter 3

my_jungsoo

017 - 83 hearts. Chapter 3 - Angela

Mar 27, 2009 01:13

I finished this one like 2 days ago but kinda hesitated on posting it. LOL! So here's the third part of my story. I hope you guys like it. It's not much though. Tried to write some smut scenes but I couldn't. Maybe next time, who knows? Haha.

Title: 83 hearts.
Pairing: Leeteuk x Heechul
Rating: PG-15
Point of View: Leeteuk and Heechul
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ageneshi March 26 2009, 17:36:10 UTC

Uwaaa~ Waited so long for this. :)

my_jungsoo March 26 2009, 17:41:34 UTC

really?

ageneshi March 26 2009, 17:59:40 UTC

Yep. I'm always checking my LJ and hoping I can read your post fast as I can. :P

LOVED IT! I like how you made it light with their love scenes. LOL.

my_jungsoo March 26 2009, 18:03:16 UTC

wow..thank you so much..that means a lot to me

10tookie24 March 26 2009, 17:43:21 UTC

finally!

KYAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!
*major spazzing*
here i go again feeling all jelly-like and warm inside haha:D
its so GOOD!i really like the mood of the story and the way you make teukchul so uncomplicated and light, and oh so sweet :D

*takes time to breathe*:D

will wait for the next one!!!

my_jungsoo March 26 2009, 17:55:21 UTC

thank you so much

dongbangsuju20 March 26 2009, 21:58:50 UTC

aww, finally the new chapter..

first.. i really need to get used to this kind of POV.. just really don't like it for other fanfics, but you write it so good <3
I just have to love it!

it is soo soo sweet <3
they are so cute together!
I love how hesitating Heechul is when he stands and waits for the members to pick him up, but didn't send a message to teukie
*hehe*

I smiled at him and turned.

“Heenim, no good night kiss?” He asked softly.

His words were like music to my ears. I felt like flying with the birds in the sky.

epic love <33
so wonderful words!

and... the last sentence **~
I want a smut scene!!
aish.. give me awesome TeukChul smut, pleeeease~
I believe in you, you can write this, for sure!! <3

thanks for this chapter, it is so lovely-cute <3

my_jungsoo March 27 2009, 04:10:29 UTC

omg..thank you so much..thank you thank you thank you..

a smut scene? i will def try my best..i kinda always end up laughing when trying to write it..haha

emi84 March 27 2009, 00:24:12 UTC

This story just make my day.. ermm feel lovely maybe.. :D

my_jungsoo March 27 2009, 04:08:29 UTC

i feel happy knowing that

yesunglover March 27 2009, 01:08:01 UTC

Aww... that is so sweet!!!
jungsoo is so, so adorable <333

my_jungsoo March 27 2009, 04:08:48 UTC

thank you so much..