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my_little_edgey

It's Jealous Head

Feb 19, 2008 12:52

This was better than the last one I wrote, anyway. I don't like it as much as the Phoenix one, because Nick giving goofy blowjobs is aparently awesome to me.

Title: It's Jealous Head
Pairing: Miles/Phoenix
Rating: NC-17

There was a wonderful air of distaste in the solemn prosecutor’s glare as he entered the waiting room of the small business and first ( Read more... )

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rebelintosanity February 20 2008, 00:57:50 UTC

I saw this and didn't think it was you. I thought you were better than the drive-by misogyny in the beginning, but other than that it was good, if a bit forced-feeling. TBH I thought your other blitzjob fic was a lot better written.

CAN YOU BUY ME SOME SKANK GLASSES? I've been having trouble getting smut written lately.

my_little_edgey February 26 2008, 22:33:19 UTC

I didn't mean for it to by mysogynic in the begining, I figured it would be the same way if he was checking out a dude, but I mean he's been around Larry long enough he's probably used to conversations like that.

As for the rest, someone mentioned that the other blow job was a little too beig on lulz and short on prons, so I was wondering if I could do a better dirty one. I guess not, but you never know, eh?

I hate writing porn 9 times out of 10. I should probably stop trying it. XD

rebelintosanity February 27 2008, 00:23:48 UTC

The "drive-by misogyny" was Edgeworth's snide comments than in Feenie being all "lol that chick's hot", XD. Edgeworth may be snarky, but he sounded like a bit of a douche really.

As to porn, if it's not what brings you joy, don't write it, is all I can tell you. It's not as if you're making any money off it. Life's too short to waste on doing what you hate.

my_little_edgey February 27 2008, 02:55:40 UTC

Like I said, I figure the situation would have gone the same way were the picture of a male or female. In my mind, Miles's security issues tend to make him see everything as an insult or a challenge. When Phoenix said she's hot, he heard something about why she was better than him. Perhaps he came across as more of the infamous 'hurt girlfriend' Worthy than I meant for it.

And I really don't write when I don't feel like it. If I wrote all the fics that interested me, rather than the ones I like writing, I'd have a few dozen. From time to time I do ones I dislike if I really feel drawn to them, but that's it.