LJ Idol Week 6: Not of Your World

[my_palimpsest]

There were a lot of things I failed to take into account when I made this deal. My wife always said that I jumped into things without thinking, and I always scoffed. But now that I've had so much time to really examine the situation, I realize that she was right

Comments

[imafarmgirl]

Sad story. I liked your use of the topic though.

[basric]

Excellent Sci-fi. with just that right amount of creepy closure at the end. Right out of the twilight zone.

Great writing.

[furzicle]

Ten minutes ago I just finished watching "Moon," a sci-fi movie from last year. It is eerily just exactly like what you just described.

[my_palimpsest]

Really? I've been wanting to see that. Maybe I'll go watch it now. I see it is on Netflix streaming. Thanks!

[alephz]

Short, simple and SUPER effective.

Thumbs up!

[fortitudehigh]

The final line is chilling!