Coprolyte

[my_palimpsest]

We excavated his apartment

Comments

[noodledays]

this is so sad. I'm hoping you'll tell me it's not based on a real life incident for you.

[my_palimpsest]

Unfortunately, it is. But is was good to write about it.

[noodledays]

I'm glad for that in any case then. <3 and I'm sorry for the loss of your dad's friend.

[whirlgig]

This is heartbreaking, but very beautifully done. Wonderful job.

[basric]

Original style, nicely written.

[irishrosedkm]

Very sad, but lovely poem.

[whipchick]

Beautiful, beautiful poem - great images. Your voice escorts the reader through the different sections with great authority.