Blue and Yellow

[my_pesticide]

And it's all in how you mix the two,
And it starts just where the light exists.
It's a feeling that you cannot miss,
And it burns a hole,
Through everyone that feels it.
Naruto braced himself to fight...again. He was alone...again. Sasuke was slumped over Itachi's body and called to Naruto, reaching out his hand. "I know you don't think you can trust

Comments

[kanoi_trace]

Cute. I found at least one typo:
Sasuke was by no means was given a hero's welcome
You keep to remove a "was".

I knew Sasuke was up to something. Though I feel Naruto's reaction should have been more extreme, even if he did like. Oh well, it was still cute, even if I felt the song didn't quite match (but that's just me).

[my_pesticide]

Thanks. I fixed the typo and added some details, maybe to make it seem more realistic. I like your avatar, by the way. Loveless is the best.

[kanoi_trace]

I'll read it when I get the chance (is currently busy).

And thanks. I ♥ Loveless ^____________^

[kanoi_trace]

I really like the extra detail you added. The teasing/argument between Sakura and Sasuke made me smile.

[anonymous]

I love this! i thought at first that this is really angstic but turned up to be so cute! Nice work :D

[my_pesticide]

thanks! Yeah, I tried to keep Sasuke's motive in the dark at first...^_^

[the_hevens_weep]

That was freakin awsome and very funny '_' :)

[my_pesticide]

hehe...thanks!^_^