swear by the moon(prolouge)

Jun 28, 2007 23:07


Prolouge:
Kakashi rolled his eyes. "They're at it again?"
Sakura nodded. "Naruto said something about Sauske, and the next thing I knew, Sauske jumped him! You know, if you weren't always late for lessons, this might not happen all the time!"
Kakashi raised an eyebrow "Are you chastizing me?" He smiled "Okay, where are they?"
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kamikazexxx July 6 2007, 20:33:31 UTC
SasuNaru Shakespeare! You had me at hello sweetie- that would combine two of my favourite things in the whole world: Naruto and Shakespeare. The concept is good and it sounds very interesting so far. The only thing is that you have a lot of typos that need to be corrected, so that the story flows more smoothly. You may need a beta, if you find it hard to edit your own work. Other than that, I eagerly await to the next installation.

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my_pesticide July 6 2007, 23:04:23 UTC
thanks, I'll be sure to do that^_^

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abhorsen3 July 6 2007, 21:26:57 UTC
This is really good!! I wonder what will happen when Naruto wakes up!! I'm looking forward to the next part, hope it'll be soon^_^

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my_pesticide July 6 2007, 23:05:02 UTC
oh it will be! I should have it up in an hour

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