Of course, then I would have to figure out how to fix it! Not sure what you mean by that, but if you don't know how to edit an entry, you only have to click on the little pencil at the top of the entry :) (PS: if you could add a link to the next part at the bottom of each entry, that would be wonderful, too.)
no enough -> not enough trying to drowned him -> drown on it's back -> its
I love this :) Draco's feelings as a stoat are wonderful. Very disjointed and simple, as befits an animal.
Oh, what a great description of being a stoat! It seems that you have some affection for the members of the weasel family - it really comes through in your writing in the first part. I'm very much looking forward to the other parts!
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Not sure what you mean by that, but if you don't know how to edit an entry, you only have to click on the little pencil at the top of the entry :) (PS: if you could add a link to the next part at the bottom of each entry, that would be wonderful, too.)
no enough -> not enough
trying to drowned him -> drown
on it's back -> its
I love this :) Draco's feelings as a stoat are wonderful. Very disjointed and simple, as befits an animal.
And the book pixies! :) Magical Wikipedia? ;)
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