I wrote this.. just.. give me some TRUTHFUL comments.. I need good criticism..

Nov 19, 2005 16:58

Said & Done
I dream until the stars fall from the sky ( Read more... )

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eternalsonshine November 19 2005, 23:16:04 UTC
nice. i like it. i want a performance.

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WOW!!! nolebaby16 November 20 2005, 15:59:19 UTC
That is amazing!!! I really wanna hear it with the music now.. those lyrics are so good!!

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laliz1117 November 21 2005, 03:34:44 UTC
hey David!
honestly it's hard to read b/c it's a song and with a song comes music...so, i can't really imagine what the song really is without the other piece. But, i look forward to the day that I'll hear it!!!
Reading it, though, seems like it really came from the heart, which is exactly what makes a song beautiful!
-LA

ahhhh this was sooooo hard to post

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