Hi. I wandered here from Christine's journal. Your poem is beautiful; it sounds very much like myself in high school. I wish I could have put it in to such cohesive and emotional words. It makes so much sense to me.
My favorite band, Rise Against, has a line that I've always written to myself; your poem reminds me of it: "If there's no war outside our heads, why are we losing?"
oh, thank you. I love it when people understand things I write, because so often when I do show people something I write (not very often), they can't really comprehend what Im trying to say.
Like I said, I dont really like this poem, I think the rhyme scheme was a little too matchy matchy with some words, but I guess its a love/hate relationship.
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My favorite band, Rise Against, has a line that I've always written to myself; your poem reminds me of it: "If there's no war outside our heads, why are we losing?"
Hope to hear more from you. Add me, please? <3
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Like I said, I dont really like this poem, I think the rhyme scheme was a little too matchy matchy with some words, but I guess its a love/hate relationship.
I <3 Rise Against. :D
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