Comments | mybrainsrmush: I'm sorry, I love you.

mybrainsrmush

I'm sorry, I love you.

Feb 20, 2012 15:57

Title: I’m sorry, I love you.

Pairing: Merlin/Arthur

Word count: ~600

Summary: Arthur loves Merlin, and Merlin loves him, but sometimes, that’s just not enough.

Warning: Character Death, OOC Merlin

Note: Comments & crits are love, even short ones <3

( I'm sorry, I love you. )

pairing: arthur/merlin, rating: pg-13, merlin, fic, merlin/arthur

Comments 12

owensheart February 20 2012, 08:31:55 UTC

GULP my heat is broken now. beautifully written and so heartbreaking, too bad Arhtur didnt open his big mouth an tell Merlin his decision, if he had this might never hae had to happen.

mybrainsrmush February 20 2012, 10:36:55 UTC

Sorry for breaking your heart, but Thankyou :D And yes, I was rather hoping this fic would leave people with an "If only..." feeling... :)

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mybrainsrmush February 20 2012, 10:35:36 UTC

Thankyou <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it, even if it was heartbreaking :')

inspired_being February 20 2012, 09:41:37 UTC

I definitely wasn't expecting that sort of ending. It've very OOC of Merlin, which I can't say I'm too big a fan of. It's well written though... and heartfelt (once I got past the shock of Merlin's actions).

mybrainsrmush February 20 2012, 10:35:06 UTC

You just reminded me of what I'd meant to put in the warnings! Sorry if you didn't like it, but I'm glad you thought it was heartfelt and well-written.

Yeah I wrote it with the intention of having the ending be a serious surprise. So I actually take that as a compliment XD I definitely understand what you mean by not really liking OOC Merlin, I'm usually the same, but for some reason I just had to write this :\

thekeyholder February 20 2012, 20:15:57 UTC

OMG what have you done to my heart... ;__;

Sure, you feel a little affection for Guinevere, but it’s like comparing the light of a candle to that of a bonfire.

^Loved that part. I really liked the narration, but the ending really shocked me. Well done!

mybrainsrmush February 21 2012, 07:56:08 UTC

Thankyou for that lovely comment, I love when people pull out quotes :D

I apologise for your heart! Here, have a pretty avvie to make you feel better :)

Yes, It was my aim to shock. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

thekeyholder February 21 2012, 17:25:49 UTC

Haha, I love quotes too, so I try to point them out every time. ^_^

Well, this kind of heartbreak is worth the pain. ;) Hehe, thanks for your avvie, I'm going to use now one made by a friend.

exx_cecilegr February 21 2012, 05:38:26 UTC

I sure did not expect that! Hee, I love angst. :D

mybrainsrmush February 21 2012, 07:54:04 UTC

o.O First thing I noticed was how eerily appropriate your avvie is o.O

Thankyou, and it was my aim to make it a surprise at the end. Whilst it's very OOC, I also believe that Merlin would go to extreme lengths to stop Arthur becoming a bad man, I just went one step farther XD