Milkshake

Feb 20, 2011 14:37

Title: Milkshake
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: PG
Genre: Romance, Fluff
Summary: Jaejoong has been seeing Yunho making milkshakes in the kitchen and he wonders why.

“I wanna watch SpongeBob the Movie with you! It’s showing now on TV!” )

pairing:yunjae, fanfic:milkshake

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301_girlz February 20 2011, 06:57:32 UTC
lovely!!!

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mycheesycake February 20 2011, 07:00:42 UTC
Thank you for reading and posting a comment~ <3

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ouji February 20 2011, 07:05:34 UTC
it's nice^^ and for some reason i get the impression that jaejoong is like a very curious little child who always asks his mom or dad 'what is that?' xD very interesting :]

the fluff is very adorable! yunho trying his best to make the perfect scene to propose is a wonderful idea^^ but he got caught too many times. He should learn to hide things faster 8) *snatches milkshake*

i don't see much typos but only at some point i think the sentence is either missing something or i just don't understand lol but anyway the writing is legible^^ good work<3

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mycheesycake February 20 2011, 07:11:20 UTC
Yea. I like it when Jaejoong acts like a lost kid. lmfao

thanks for reading and commenting. :D

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ouji February 20 2011, 07:14:18 UTC
lol you're very welcome dear^^ hope to see more from you.

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bexy31 February 20 2011, 07:12:16 UTC
Aww, so cute ^__^ It's sweet that Yunho was trying to perfect his milkshake-making skills :D
Thanks for writing/sharing :)

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mycheesycake February 20 2011, 07:17:32 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting!^^

btw, I love your fic, 'Super Gay and Screaming' ~~ And i'm sorry also cause i didn't get to post a comment on that one! lol

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mycheesycake February 20 2011, 08:08:57 UTC
Yunho only makes milkshakes for Joongie! >:D loljk.

thanks for reading and commenting. (:

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cleichiisai February 20 2011, 08:01:47 UTC
cute lovely yunjae couple ^^

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mycheesycake February 20 2011, 08:09:06 UTC
thanks for reading and commenting. ^^

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