Be Careful What You Wish For Chapter 2

Oct 21, 2008 19:03


Title: Be Careful What You Wish For...
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Patrick Sykes was having a bad day until an accident shoved artist Cylean Bartlett into his life making all his dreams come true overnight, but is everything really that simple?

Chapter One

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grumpy_face October 21 2008, 21:35:07 UTC
Wow, I really love your story! Two chapters in and I'm completely hooked. Both Patrick and Cylean are great, natural characters, and I definitely love it when the men are men, like I bet these two are :P Please continue soon :D

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mycherryred November 5 2008, 19:00:46 UTC
Aww thank you! I'm glad you like it. Chapter three is written and should be up sometime very soon :)

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mildly_neurotic October 21 2008, 23:53:20 UTC
I think this arc is really going to let your story telling and character building abilities shine!

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mycherryred November 5 2008, 19:02:04 UTC
*snuggles* Thanks babe, you are amazingly supportive about my writing :)

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mildly_neurotic November 9 2008, 06:47:26 UTC
Your writing speaks for itself hun!

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_calex_ October 22 2008, 02:12:57 UTC
I love Cylean. So cynical and jaded, but drawn to Patrick already. I love that instantaneous pull he feels for Patrick. This story really has me wishing for more.

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mycherryred November 5 2008, 19:02:53 UTC
More will come very soon promise, chapter 3 has been written :)

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wide_eyed_raven December 16 2008, 02:45:55 UTC
Cylean sounds lovely too... lovely, but lonely. *huggles him*

On to chapter 3!!

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nightfun December 16 2008, 16:28:26 UTC
Actually Cylean sounds like a hottie too

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