"Jongin gifts him with a sweet smile, closing the distance and sealing their lips together in a silent promise to never leave his side again. They reach their high together, limbs entangled as if they are one body instead of two. Minseok caresses Jongin’s bare back, whispering sweet nothings into his boyfriend’s ear as he cuddles up against his chest." YELLS
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Ahh my long delayed comment okay okay okay, lets go.
Man, you know how to tug at the heartstrings.All the descriptions of their past happiness interposed with how miserable Minseok and Jongin are apart, oh god it was torture to read that.You just want to reach over and shake them and scream.
Its weird that in a Xiukia fic, Luchen stole the show for me, I don't even ship it and I loved them in this.The bar scene with dirty talking Chen 'fans self' yes papi.
I like that dead landlady conspired to get thes etwo fools back together and enlisted evil genius Jongdae in this mission.It took forever but at least they got their shit together in the end. Great job author-nim! Please give this pairing more love and fics, please, please
SOOOOO, i swear i'm not allergic to happy endings and everything, but i think my favorite part was part I? I don't man, like i told you on line, the way you wrote minseok in that part, and more than that, the way you wrote jongin according minseok made my heart ache so much. I seriously felt like i was in love with jongin, just like minseok (let's be real i might be but that's not the point here ;) )
Your descriptions were great, GREAT, and the whole fic made me laugh, and then gasp, and then aaaaaw so hard ;u; but that first part.. /always bowing to the first part
AND how can i end this comment without mentionning Jongdae.... /slow claps for jongdae
haha and yea Jongdae mh, one day I dedicate a whole fic to him where he is a spiteful asshole.
I worked really hard on the descriptions department this time and I'm glad it was delivered =) While I was writing this fic, I tried to imagine how it would feel like to still be so very much in love with someone that your heart yearns for them every passing second.
So when I skimmed through the first part I thought OH GOD BROKEN XIUKAI I CANT DO THIS (bc really idk why people insist on writing TRAGIC STORIES about them like it's kaisoo 2.0 - it hurts my heart) so i felt i really had to get into the right mood to read this and give this story my full attention (as it deserves
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“I’m no fairy godmother, Cinderella," he says. "Nor am I Tinkerbell. You need to solve this puzzle yourself.” yes make him work for the hot piece of ass
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Man, you know how to tug at the heartstrings.All the descriptions of their past happiness interposed with how miserable Minseok and Jongin are apart, oh god it was torture to read that.You just want to reach over and shake them and scream.
Its weird that in a Xiukia fic, Luchen stole the show for me, I don't even ship it and I loved them in this.The bar scene with dirty talking Chen 'fans self' yes papi.
I like that dead landlady conspired to get thes etwo fools back together and enlisted evil genius Jongdae in this mission.It took forever but at least they got their shit together in the end.
Great job author-nim! Please give this pairing more love and fics, please, please
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Secondly...whenever I put Jongdae into ANY of my stories that kid somehow manages to steal the show and I'm all like "Can you not for once?!"
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SOOOOO, i swear i'm not allergic to happy endings and everything, but i think my favorite part was part I? I don't man, like i told you on line, the way you wrote minseok in that part, and more than that, the way you wrote jongin according minseok made my heart ache so much. I seriously felt like i was in love with jongin, just like minseok (let's be real i might be but that's not the point here ;) )
Your descriptions were great, GREAT, and the whole fic made me laugh, and then gasp, and then aaaaaw so hard ;u; but that first part.. /always bowing to the first part
AND how can i end this comment without mentionning Jongdae.... /slow claps for jongdae
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haha and yea Jongdae mh, one day I dedicate a whole fic to him where he is a spiteful asshole.
I worked really hard on the descriptions department this time and I'm glad it was delivered =)
While I was writing this fic, I tried to imagine how it would feel like to still be so very much in love with someone that your heart yearns for them every passing second.
Thank you for your sweet comment babe <3
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