Story: Moon Child

[myene_01]

Story: Moon Child
SS/RL, + child.
Warning: Implied MPreg, but could also be read as implied adoption.  
Raiting: PG

Summary: Everyone allways thinks Severus's child will be brilliant. But what will Severus's do when his child has a serious learning disability?

SIDE NOTE: I am looking for a good beta. Some one that does something other than run spell

Comments

[diandraxsnape]

Wow, this is just wonderful. I'm really impressed with the details in which you write. I hope there's more to come. Well done!

[myene_01]

thanks :) I may do more. I was thinkign of a story from Donny's pov, but i'm honestly not sure how to go about it. Most likely, this is a one shot.

I got other stories too, jsut click the fan fic tag. This and Ron's War are my favortes. WARNING, some of the fan fic is NC17, but it is listed as such

[a_boleyn]

Well written story ... well plotted and very moving.

[myene_01]

thanks :)

lovely icon...hmm...think ill go get soem sushi

[schnuffie]

Haven´t read a Snape-Lupin story in aaaaageeees. Good for me I did now!

It was unbelievable. Thanks so much for writing. Moving to see Sev with his son and the beginning off understandment.

Thanks for wrting it. Wish my english would be better, so I could tell you more *siiigh*

[myene_01]

thanks! O know this Sev will look OOC to some at first, but facing the fact that yoru child will not, can not, be what you whish them to be can change anyone.

P.S. I whish my english was better too, hehe :D

[jedirita]

What a great story! I imagine it would be hard for a perfectionist like Snape to have a child with a disability, but I'm glad he came around.

[myene_01]

Thanks. This is defently my favorte story ive done to date, just narrowly beating our Ron's War.

When workign with the special students, part of the problems that the parents had was that they were in denile, over compensating (doing *everything* for the child) or doing the 'tough love' and doing nothign for the child. The mothers also tended to get to a 'its all my falt, I did something to them' stange. It takes a long time, if ever, to coem to grips with a child having a sersious learning need.

[jedirita]

Yes, you conveyed that very well. And it took Severus seeing another child with a problem, to be able to accept his own son.

[myene_01]

I just happened to be over lookign my stories and saw I didn;t respond to your review! (bad Myene, not cookie!)

Thank you for your review! I see you in stories all over the place (can;t forget that icon) so its nice seeing the 'big' reviewers respond to a story.

Part of the reason I wrote snape as having such a hard time was that he lives in his mind, eh is a 'hard core' acadmic. So few people with mild leraning disabilties, let alone one like DS, ever are. I can count on one hand that number of peopel that told me that college would be a good idea *despite* of the learning disabilties. I've had scores of people, sadly enough quite a few teachers, telling me that I shouldn't bother because I had learnign disabilties.

Thanks again for the review, check otu the rest of my fanfic tag if ya wnat, I'll be updateign again soem time after mid may.

[nimrod_9]

Lovely story. Sad but uplifting in the end. *pets them all* Thanks for sharing!

[myene_01]

hi! I've read a bunch of yoru stuff, it's so cool to get a review from you :)

thanks!