A briefest moment of passing weakness

Jul 22, 2005 20:07

A briefest moment of passing weaknessEven though, at the end, it sits ( Read more... )

regret, poetry, writing

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redpillow August 31 2005, 01:10:31 UTC
I deleted my old comment to this one.

To be honest, I'm actually beginning to appreciate this scrap of literary bullshit. It's definitely the more substantial of the three you posted. It's also unsurprisingly versatile, in that it takes on or can take on all different sorts of meanings/implications. The parallels are extremely effective, and nearly everything is well articulated. It's just simply well-written.

With utmost reluctance, I give it a thumbs up.

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