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myjulien

arashi fic: anseo

Nov 24, 2009 00:20

Anseo (Irish for present/here)
Pairings: Aiba/Jun and Jun/Sho
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,156
Because I’m not doing je_holiday. I was wondering what to do about this but I ended up writing this instead. I... actually don’t like it.

( Jun decides to bypass the fist of people just beyond the set after his fourth consecutive bow; Jun is usually unfailingly polite but the echinacea he’d taken in the morning hasn’t worked as well as it usually does and he just wants to close his eyes for a moment. )

fic, arashi

Comments 57

g_esquared November 23 2009, 16:37:35 UTC

I'm normally okay about commenting, but when you write like this I just think I'm going to sound horribly trite in comparison and ramble stupidly and unnecessarily and -

I think I'm going to have to take you up on the 'come back later when I'm more coherent' offer.

myjulien November 23 2009, 16:42:01 UTC

Are you mad? I almost deleted this after reading let the light in, I swear. This was pretty much a goner anyway, I should really try harder but my entire life is testament to the fact that I don't. Do anything.

g_esquared November 29 2009, 09:33:51 UTC

I promised a comment, and I'm not any more coherent right now but I'm just going to say it all whether or not you want to hear it.

Seriously. How do you write like this. How. Your style is so distinctive, so - like, when I read it just makes me selfishly grateful that you are here writing Arashi fic and I get to read it and just. Your depiction of them, I've never read anything like it. When I read it after posting let the light in I was thinking, oh dear lord what have I done, because, this. This. I swear ( ... )

waxrose November 23 2009, 16:42:08 UTC

Aaaah, what is with all the wonderful fic exploding out of fandom this morning? I'm getting spoiled! (and very distracted from working on my own!) ♥♥♥

This is...so good, you just let emotions run raw and words carry such sleek images. There's nothing simple about the tangle of relationships here and you embrace that complexity so well.

I do have to admit that I found the ending just a little abrupt and confusing, but I always have trouble with endings - both in reading and writing. :D

This is utterly fantastic, and now I'm going to read it again. *_______*

thank you! myjulien November 23 2009, 16:56:29 UTC

I know right, the ending is such a cop out. Actually the entire thing is weak, so I'm glad that you liked it. I did find this pretty difficult to write, especially since I tend to rush through it all (my attention span, let me show you it), and I'm beginning to realize I may have a serious problem with resolution for fic.

I simply cannot wait for your je_holiday fic!

Re: thank you! waxrose November 23 2009, 17:14:10 UTC

I have no ending for it, bwah. I am super lots, I may have to start something new altogether just to finish in time. I also have issues with resolutions. :D

nicefinalbeam November 23 2009, 17:18:03 UTC

*_______*

I seriously don't even know what to say.

myjulien November 23 2009, 17:21:08 UTC

Oh, no.

nicefinalbeam November 23 2009, 17:22:56 UTC

LOL. It was really good! The emotion in it was powerful. And for some reason I'm a sucker for Jun POV. ♥

myjulien November 23 2009, 17:31:55 UTC

I think you should know I cling to the validation in your comment because well. This really didn't turn out the way I wanted it to.

I find I gravitate toward Jun POV myself, in both reading and writing.

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nlovers November 23 2009, 17:22:18 UTC

wow...this is just wow....i feel drenched just by reading it....can you possibly make a sequel? pretty please? i would like to read about it...

myjulien November 23 2009, 17:34:08 UTC

Oh man I don't think you have any idea just how incredibly happy you've made me and just between the two of us: I actually am not averse to the idea of writing a sequel at all. :)

nlovers November 23 2009, 20:41:10 UTC

wow...now you just made my day...and it has only just begun.....about the sequel...please think about it....you see i'm sucker for a complete ending....one where everything is tied up at the end....

ps....i feel so bad for aiba chan....because i think he loves jun so much and jun does love him too...

onlymostlytrue November 23 2009, 17:35:21 UTC

I WILL LIKE IT ENOUGH FOR BOTH OF US. ♥♥♥

myjulien November 24 2009, 04:21:16 UTC

Hurray!

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