flavor of life interlude & merboys update

[myjulien]

AU Fic: Flavor of Life (Interlude)
Pairing: Sho/Jun
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 736
Summary: Can be read as a one-shot but actually picks up right where I left off in my Arashi porn star AU.

Comments

[miscetera]

Generally, I can't really get into Aiba/Sho, but I love your Merboys AU so dearly. It's lighter, I think, than your other pieces and uniquely stunning. I'm not sure I've figured out what about the style strikes me so hard, but at least I know it's love. ♥ And I think I totally failed to comment on the first part to this, but eeeeeeeeeee the Aimiya! The beautiful, beautiful Aimiya.

Ooooh, when sign-ups start for je_holiday you should totally put your name down because it is the largest (and best, in my opinion) exchange of the year, and the amount of gorgeous writing produced for it is always overflowing--and the exchange would be just that much sparklier if you joined in. 8Db

[myjulien]

You're always so museful and sweet and such a joy.

Ooh, it does sound wonderful, especially with you in the mix.♥

[maibachan]

You really are all sorts of amazing.<3
The emotion in the first piece is just intense...and on a less intellectual level... HOT.

Aiba's bumblingly sweet naivety is heartwarming in your merboys fic is <3.
I love being able to see everything that is taking plae around him, and yet still be dragged around with him as his attention shifts from one thing to the next.

Beautiful as always.

[myjulien]

Thanks!

[maibachan]

It totally works - and it might just be me, but I think you get a lot out Sho, simply from everything he doesn't say. I am a sucker for body language, and this has it in bucketloads.

Gokusen - yeah. I LOVE the kids. The workplace pressure and one or two members of the staff are a bit of a challenge, but I am surviving. I have some lessons where I just want to cry because they don't work - but I have been told that it fairly common.
I remind myself that I would suffer the same issues no matter where I worked - and it all pales in comparison to the fact that I am finally where I want to be. That, and Arashi, get me through the day <3

[amaskuponthesky]

I really love the way you describe things especially the way how Aiba reacted to his new surroundings. You expressed Aiba's feelings very well indeed.

[myjulien]

Thank you for such a nice, thoughtful comment.

You're actually currently in my alma mater which I shouldn't actually tell you but whatever.♥

(I also love your graphics community.)

[amaskuponthesky]

No problem (:
Woah serious? That's really cool! ♥♥♥
(If you didn't know, I love your fics bb~)

[myjulien]

Aww that warms the cockles of my heart. And I love Nino a lot too so I'm hoping to fulfill your desire to see more of him in my fic!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! It really makes me glad and I LOVE your icon!

[boblemon]

Okay, one, WTF HOW CAN YOU LEAVE IT THERE. You're going to write some more, right? Like some serious Jun/Aiba loving, or some more OT5, RIGHT? I love this universe so much because there's so much tension between off of them... not only is there something going on between Jun and Aiba, but it's obvious the other members like Aiba too, not to mention Nino and Ohno, plus Sho being so fucking hot in this part. I'm waiting for some more, even if it takes forever to come. =.=

Two, I might suggest posting a link to the first part of the mermaid story even though I already read it and therefore have no such use for it. I'm still rooting for Aiba/Nino at this point, even though Aiba barely noticed that with the decision he made he can't see his friend any more. I'm really looking forward to what happens after this, if he falls in love with Sho more or if he gets homesick.

Thank you for both of these! <3

[myjulien]

OTZ it completely slipped my mind because the first chapter was so recent so thank you so much for the heads up. I also want to say this is such a glorious comment and I'll treasure it forever.

[boblemon]

Friendly Ninoai love melts my heart, especially when Nino knows he's in too deep and Aiba is blissfully ignorant. It's one of the pairings I'm very particular about, actually... >.>;

I know what you mean. I feel like I haven't updated in forever, yet there are several wonderful stories that are updated like every day. =A= It makes me feel like a slacker, you know? And I appreciate your compliment even though sometimes I just feel like I'm long winded and take up too much time with details that don't matter.

Of course I don't mind. ^.^ I'm still a little stuck on that problem, though. Maybe I am just hopeless in determining whether the author is one that would accept criticism well or not? Although usually the ones that I am confident would like criticism, I can't think of anything to say...