The return of Flavour of Life.

Jul 06, 2012 19:35

Title: Flavour of Life (the next part); Part the first/Interlude
Pairings: Arashi/Arashi or Sho/Aiba, Sho/Jun, Ohno/Nino, Jun/Nino, Ohno/Aiba and Ohno/Sho.
Rating: ADULT
Word Count: 2,159 / 6,931
Summary: Arashi as PORN STARS. I don’t know how to make this any clearer.
AN: I'm really, really sorry for the wait, alexiela (who is one of my favourite people ( Read more... )

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all4cyanide July 7 2012, 00:28:35 UTC
When I saw the title to this my first thought was "Wait.... wasn't there..." then I read on and ZOMFG. I was PSYCHED. I have the first two bits of this in a Word document on my computer from the first time I read this. This part will go right into the document to continue the magic. SQUEEE~! I'm so dumb happy right now. Everything about what just happened in that hotel room was HOT. I love a well written and well thought out smut fic. Plus the added emotion~! Why do I think there will be more? I think it's the ambiguousness of Sho's behavior and that ending. Hm. LOL I'm happy with how this is tho. LOVED IT. Will read again. <3

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myjulien July 7 2012, 13:55:09 UTC
Oh wow, I think that's the most complimentary thing ever! Thank you!

I am hoping that there will be more to come down the road. Writing doesn't come as easily to me as I'd like it to and I have problems reaching word count as you can tell but hopefully it won't take years again for the next part and hopefully too people will still be interested then, like you!

Again, thank you for reading and commenting to let me know that you liked it; it really gives me added incentive to plow on! :)

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syri_chii July 7 2012, 01:00:35 UTC
I have read the first part of this and it kinda saddens me that I didn't left a comment even though I've read it like a thousand times. I'm so sorry.

I adore so much your writing. It is amazing and your words leave deep impression on me.
I hope this has a continuation because I feel like there is still unresolved feelings.

Jun walks into the hotel bar, finding Sho easily despite the dim ambiance. Sho has a glass of what looks to be whisky in front of him. He doesn’t look up when Jun slides neatly into the seat next to him.

“How much of that was for the camera?”

Sho’s voice is almost unrecognisable as he gravels out the answer. “I don’t know.”

~somehow, this part strikes me the most. ♥

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myjulien July 7 2012, 13:59:10 UTC
No, thank you so much for commenting and saying all those nice things! :) I can get very self-conscious sometimes about posting fic that noone seems to be reading or liking so I'm really happy to know that my words have made an impression on somebody and even more sheepishly pleased that you like the very brief, sudden ending. Thank you and I hope I'll have more for you to read down the road as well! ♥

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jellybean6972 July 7 2012, 21:10:58 UTC
I'm so happy you continued the porn star series! I like all of the intermingling of the Arashi members, that's always a favorite for me. The sex is awesome, but so is the atmosphere you've created. This fic feels deep and intense. It definitely pulls me in. Thanks for sharing :D

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myjulien July 8 2012, 12:39:25 UTC
Ah, thank you so much for reading and commenting to tell me that! I'm truly flattered by what you've said about the atmosphere!! I really appreciate it! :)

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deelovesryo July 8 2012, 03:09:41 UTC
I'm really amazed at the raw passion and the way you convey it, your writing is really diferent and every word seems to have a subtle feeling behind ( ... )

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deelovesryo July 8 2012, 03:15:57 UTC
¡Oh! I didnt say "I have to look up several words in my dictionary and that is also a praise even if you cant belive it, lol" because I know a lot of english, of course. But it made me happy that in a porn fic I have to look up for words I didnt know yet, words that give the scenes a different flavour and give the actions a richer sense.
Thanks for sharing by the way, I forgot to say it before, lol

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myjulien July 8 2012, 13:26:29 UTC
❤ ♡ ❤!
★ ☆ ✰!

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myjulien July 8 2012, 13:25:41 UTC
Thank you very much for leaving me such wonderful comments! They really make my day! I'm so happy that you've read and enjoyed the series thus far and have all these thoughts. It's heartening and I shall endeavour to write more and bring out more of their mindsets and feelings to the fore! :):)

Thank you for saying that about the ending as well; I thought it was lacking in quite a lot of ways myself so am glad that you like it.

Ahaha, actually I find writing Ohmiya a little challenging so thank you and I'll try to write more of it!

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boblemon July 8 2012, 10:33:22 UTC
Yay! I'm happy to see a continuation of this! The last two were so sexy, but not at all lacking in emotion, especially whatever this thing is between Jun and Aiba that's unresolved. They haven't really done anything intense in front of the others (meaning, it's usually Jun watching?) so I'm wondering what it will be like when that happens. I feel like Aiba has just changed them all from what they were without him.

Also, the fact that this is Aiba-centric really hits my buttons. But although there's that, there's also a lot more, like the subtle Ohmiya and Sho just... taking control. XD Like your interlude when he fucked Jun in the middle of the night. He's making it serious between them, instead of just work, and I like how that affects everything else. :) I really hope there will be more from this series!

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myjulien July 8 2012, 13:42:16 UTC
Yay!! I'm so happy that you're still reading! Your comments always bring me such joy too. Thank you ( ... )

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boblemon July 8 2012, 22:23:14 UTC
I'm surprised that you said you didn't have any direction with this, because I feel like there are a lot of things that happened subtly, like I mentioned. Like the ending of the interlude, where Aiba looked away after catching them was really profound! Also, throwing Sho in the middle sort of makes it all dramatic for me. It's really hard to tell whether you're going for pairings, or all of them loving each other (I'm sure it's a bit of both). I'm really intrigued by this universe, so if you'd like to talk about it with someone I'm up for it. :)

Ohno and Sho have a variety of "sides" to them, so making them aggressive in bed is good with me! Honestly, I can see Sho getting really worked up in situations like that and just doing what he wants to. And I love Ohno too~ I especially love writing Ohno because he's so interesting and you can do a lot with him. So I get it yes~ <3 ( ... )

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