A secret gift!

Feb 02, 2010 21:16

I'm only posting this here, and the only place I'm mentioning this is on my twitter ( Read more... )

short story, to feel the sun

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erebekah February 3 2010, 23:01:11 UTC
Okay, so I lied on my review when I said I was going to stop stalking your profile...but I'm proud of myself for clicking over here and finding this!

Woot-woot!

Tata,
Rebekah

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raconteur99 February 21 2010, 21:46:43 UTC
Oh, this was just wonderful! I loved knowing what happened after they got married...and before they did married people things. :) It was such a sweet piece, and I adored it!

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soojinee June 11 2010, 02:44:08 UTC
Cute fluff. I positively love it, and it seems like a very good ending to everything. Just out of curiosity, since it was thrown out there a few times, both by Jonah and Grace herself, in what way did Jonah love Grace before he knew her? I thought he only became attracted to her after she started working at her dad's firm.

Anyway yeah, love this. But you already knew that, judging from my previous reviews I left you on FP. :) You should post this on FP, even though it IS a bit short. :]

-- Alyssa

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mylilac_wine June 11 2010, 02:47:59 UTC
What Jonah means isn't that he loved Gracie specifically, since it's impossible to know someone if you never met/interacted/knew of their existance. What he REALLY meant was that he knew he was going to love the person that would be his wife with all of his heart, and he didn't want to jeopardize his heart and his physicality for someone who might not be the person he was supposed to marry. He reserved and saved that love, and his physical actions, for that person. Does that make any sense?

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:) anonymous July 14 2010, 18:26:26 UTC
Ahhhh!!! I love this little vignette, I keep re-reading it over and over again :) Currently, Jonah and Grace are my favorite couple. They're just so sweet together!! I'm waiting for the third story in the "To Feel the Sun" series. I absolutely adore your writing! :D

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emily_brooke93 September 7 2010, 07:34:19 UTC
Okay, I kind of love you. :P Thanks for having characters that wait for marriage! I love Jonah and Gracie! This was just too cute, and totally what I needed to read.

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mylilac_wine September 8 2010, 00:10:22 UTC
Awww, thanks so much! I like having stories where the characters wait for marriage. It's kind of refreshing. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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