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[mylostelegy]

Late November Love

Late November, a moonlit sky

Comments

[kryptique]

Amazing...

From Weaver...

[anonymous]

I really enjoyed this. The imagery is clear for me and I definitely tuned in to the mood. I like the way you used aggressive terms to describe passive actions. Bring it home....I understand how your seeing things right now, I want to know the strength of your love (yearning?, obsession?, true love?), does cement turn to dust, withering from the heat of your passion? Do you see her, smell her, feel her in places she's been? yah yah yah...thanks for letting me read this, it's pretty personal stuff. Hope you find the commentary helpful.

[kryptique]

Since I have more than 3 seconds now, I thought I'd elaborate

[wybo]

Any truth behind it?

Anyway fantastic poem, and kryp is right the imagery and word choice are amazing.

It rolls off the tounge nicely.

Ever thought of writing an epic?