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mymuseandi

SPN Fic: Difference

Jun 20, 2011 01:55

Fandom: Supernatural

Genre: Gen

Rating: PG-13 for a lot of the F words. It's weird (for me, at least) but fun to make them cuss so much.

Word count: ~4, 700

Characters: Sam, Dean, Bobby and Jessica

Spoilers: This is an AU, so no spoilers! However, this is set a year before the canon-pilot, so all the Winchesters' reactions are in compliance to the ( Read more... )

spn fic: difference, spn

Comments 12

hansons_angel June 19 2011, 20:39:29 UTC

Oh, sweet Jesus. This was my prompt and I wasn't sure anyone was going to bother with it because it was so -- small and difficult in many ways. At least -- I found it difficult, LOL -- which is why I shoved it out there, hoping someone else would be able to take a crack at it.

This was EPIC. In so many ways. So many. I couldn't read it fast enough the first time, and then I went through it a second time and tried to take it slower, really soak it in, but the same thing happened, I raced through it because I just wanted to get it all into my head as quick as I could, so many images and words that I wanted to commit to my mind because they were so good.(Ha-ha, I need to quit saying "so good," find better adjectives to describe what I think about this ( ... )

mymuseandi July 7 2011, 16:24:16 UTC

First of all, I apologize for taking such a long time to reply, I'm so immersed in my summergen and my BB. And secondly, YEAY, YOU LIKED IT! :)

I raced through it because I just wanted to get it all into my head as quick as I could, so many images and words that I wanted to commit to my mind because they were so good.

This is simply so sweet of you, thank you so much. This is one of the highest compliments a writer can get, and I'm thrilled that you are so pleased with my response to your prompt.

I think my favorite part, the part that did me in was when they got John's body and then washed it...

That's one of my favorite parts too, especially because I think the should have shown an actual scene of that, and that it comes from a personal experience.

I love that there are so many open avenues to explore in this storyI didn't intend to write it that way, but after it was posted I reread it again and thought that the ending was a little open-ended, so yeah, who knows right ( ... )

fifimom June 20 2011, 02:36:13 UTC

Wonderfully written, you had me near tears a couple of times. Thanks for sharing.

mymuseandi July 7 2011, 16:28:48 UTC

My apologies for the late reply, I'm deep into my summergen and my BB.

Thank you so much for reading. I didn't mean to write it so sad, but I'm still glad it managed to evoke you into feeling what and how the character feels. I hope it wasn't too traumatising! :)

embroiderama June 20 2011, 08:47:54 UTC

Oh wow, this made me cry a little, but I love it. What you did with each of the characters feels right, but DEAN, oh Dean. His grief is so sharp and fuzzy all at the same time, I want to hug him.

mymuseandi July 7 2011, 16:34:50 UTC

I'm so sorry for the late reply!

His grief is so sharp and fuzzy all at the same time, I want to hug him.

I want to hug him too! I always thought that Dean's grieving would be a mixture of sharp and blurred, and that sometimes he wasn't himself, and I was afraid it might be a little out of character, but it's great that you didn't think so!!

Thanks for reading! *hands you a Kleenex*

lidoshka June 20 2011, 14:22:50 UTC

beautiful, just beautiful!
I think i've migth have even shed a few tears too.. or was it because i'm also reading this at 2 am... ^^;

mymuseandi July 7 2011, 16:41:21 UTC

My apologies for the late reply!

Thank you so much for reading this *hands you a Kleenex* But maybe also the late hour contributes to the tears :) I'm glad you like the story :)

borgmama1of5 June 21 2011, 01:17:44 UTC

So sad!

Dean's desire for numbness, his blaming himself, his anger at Sam--all fit right in to Dean as we know him from the show.

And his decision to go with Sam and Jess is also in character.

I was crying as I read.

I wonder what would happen in this universe with Sam and the YED? Would Jess still have to die? You open so many possibilities with this, I wouldn't mind more.

And for the record, I usually don't get excited about AUs.

mymuseandi July 7 2011, 16:47:28 UTC

I'm sorry for the late reply! Summergen and BB was in my head.

Dean's desire for numbness, his blaming himself, his anger at Sam--all fit right in to Dean as we know him from the show.

Yes, I'm glad you find it all in character! I was afraid that it might be a little off.

I wonder what would happen in this universe with Sam and the YED? Would Jess still have to die?

I'm not sure as well LOL Didn't realise I've written a rather open ending, so it can go either way, we'll see! I'm glad the story intrigued you so much!

Thanks for reading! *hands you a Kleenex*