someone find a title for this poem

Aug 04, 2005 10:58

Today I feel sad ( Read more... )

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brandonisaak August 4 2005, 17:15:43 UTC
you could use the title to disclose literally what the subject is...but maybe that is a little too straightforward. I love the poem though, especially the way the stanzas play together.

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anonymous August 4 2005, 22:57:29 UTC
Geez. This sounds a pit too poetic and melancholy. Are you feeling ok? Haha.

Anyway, call me sometime. My new number is 918 - 576-1078!

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anonymous August 4 2005, 22:58:10 UTC
ARGH. Hate hate hate hate IT when I'm not logged in.

This is Jen, and uh, that's my phone number up there.

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nuages August 5 2005, 15:41:20 UTC
I agree with Brandon. The subject matter as the title would help me a lot with the meaning.

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heartseeker August 5 2005, 17:25:00 UTC
I love this Andey... you deep kid you ;)

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ordinarymachine August 5 2005, 19:11:22 UTC
It is good to see you writing again. I enjoyed our talking on Wednesday. What I was going to say before James and Nick came in was that I am happy for you and your new gal. At first it was really weird calling anyone besides myself your girlfriend, but I think it is good. I really hope we can finish talking again soon. Your friendship has meant a ton to me and I've missed it...as soon as we can dissolve the awkwardness between us. Call me, when you've got some time to spare. love the poem.

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A few thoughts... mynameisandey August 7 2005, 08:29:28 UTC
Rachel, I glad you feel this way. Sorry things have been so awkward. I know I haven't felt very comfortable around you, this post makes me feel comfortable though. I'm glad your happy for me and Jesi. I don't like the idea of "finishing talking" friends don't have beginings and ends to their conversations, they just talk.
Lyndsie and Brandon, what the heck is this subject matter I should name it after. I like your logic, but 100% of the point was me being lazy and having other people name my poems for me. so do it. ciao.

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