Now I get to post my fic from hpvalensmut!! ^_^

[mynameissirius]

Title: A Suggestion
Author: Rain mynameissirius
Recipient: a_belladonna
Pairing: Sirius/Snape
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5002
Summary: “I’ve a suggestion,” Sirius said softly, breaking the silence. “Mind you this is not my way of professing anything permanent or definite, but it’s just a suggestion.”Author’s notes: I hope that while I was not able to include all of the

Comments

[aylaranzz]

So good!! I loved it.

[iheartbowie]

Thanks ^_^

[lufia_vs_erim]

Hey, I had already read this! Where? o_o

So, well, I'm usually not a big fan of these "afterlife" fics but at least in this one we don't get some mushy "happy ever after in paradise" nonsense... I think you were going for "awkward" when writing the conversation and you succeeded perfectly, to the point that it's sometimes pretty frustrating to just read it.

The memory sequences, for their part, are awesome and the sex is really hot. ^_^

The "happy ending" of sorts is nice, even if I usually root for the bittersweet stuff. Good job!

[iheartbowie]

hpvalensmut maybe? I wrote this for that originally. ^_^;;

Hehe, it didn't seem all that likely that they would have some sort of happy ending no matter how I did it. Sirius was definately having a hard time making his point throughout it.

I'm always glad to know that the sex is hot. ^_~

Thanks for the compliments!

[orange_bastard]

i love happy endings! Awesome ♥

[iheartbowie]

Hehe...one can only hope for the happy ending. ^_^ Thanks.

[warped_factor]

Aww, that was lovely! I like the idea of them going back and getting a second chance. :)

[iheartbowie]

I'm glad that you liked it. ^_^ Thanks!

[herbailiwick]

That's so sweet, the "second chance." You should write more on that.

[iheartbowie]

I'm glad that you liked it. ^_^ I don't know if I'll be writing more on this anytime soon, but I've got a LOT of different stories that I'm working on. I hope that you'll read more in the future.