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Jul 07, 2010 12:07

Wrote a song last night in about... 10 minutes? As you can probably tell from the words, I'm having issues with someone right now. At least it provides creative inspiration...?

I don't think I like the bridge, though. )

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xbassbeatrhythm July 7 2010, 18:58:27 UTC
You wrote that in ten minutes? Seriously?! Damn you're good!

I always worry when I see how well you write lyrics like this...anything I can help with?

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 19:08:10 UTC
More like feverishly scratched the words onto paper when they started pouring out. My muse hits hard, and late at night when I'm trying to sleep. >.> Why do you worry?

I'm having a little trouble deciding how the melody should go, especially with the lead guitar. And I REALLY don't like the bridge, since it doesn't rhyme. >< Any input would be welcome. The more I look at it, the more I want to nitpick and tear it apart.

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xbassbeatrhythm July 7 2010, 19:47:20 UTC
Yeah, they never pick nice opportune moments... >>; Just worry about what you might be feeling sometimes when you write these things.

Want to grab coffee and we can look through it together?

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:10:12 UTC
No, they don't. >< Oh, it's... you know. It's not like I'm crying or anything. Just frustrated or whatever.

Definitely. Meet you at the usual place?

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shh_im_talking July 7 2010, 19:40:45 UTC
Pretty good. Ten minutes?

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 19:44:30 UTC
Thanks. I think so. Time wasn't as important as getting it out as soon as possible. I tweaked a couple of words this morning, but other than that it's pretty much how I got it last night.

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shh_im_talking July 7 2010, 19:58:21 UTC
I like it.

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:11:02 UTC
Thanks! ^^

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kindabuchou July 7 2010, 19:45:37 UTC
So this is what you wanted to show me? XDD Want to hear it in person.

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:12:01 UTC
I still don't know if I like it, but I'd like you to hear it.

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kindabuchou July 7 2010, 20:19:20 UTC
Let me be the judge.

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mamushi_burger July 7 2010, 20:01:36 UTC
It's kinda... I don't know... ^^; Makes me feel like you need a SERIOUS hug!

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:13:18 UTC
*hugs* I'll be okay, Momo. It's just one of those things.

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mamushi_burger July 7 2010, 20:17:24 UTC
Might be, but still think you need a hug!

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:25:20 UTC
Okay. Next time we meet up? ^^

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tensai_charm July 7 2010, 20:23:23 UTC
Yuuta...

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mynameisyuuta July 7 2010, 20:26:06 UTC
...It's just... he's been calling me behind 'Kaasan's back, saying things...

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tensai_charm July 7 2010, 20:30:38 UTC
It was one of the reasons I wanted to talk to you. He hasn't fooled anyone.

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mynameisyuuta July 10 2010, 16:56:18 UTC
...So does 'Kaasan know, or just you and Neesan?

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