Just Before Dawn

Jan 22, 2013 17:51


Just Before Dawn
Myungsoo/Sungyeol; AU, almost!angst, fluff; 3,420 words

Myungsoo was twelve when his family moved to the countryside. )

myungsoo, sungyeol, myungyeol, au, oneshot, infinite

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mangafanxd January 23 2013, 17:29:28 UTC
;A; oh god, you had me tricked. ;A; BUT GHOST!SUNGYEOL I CAN'T HE DIED YOU KILLED HIM OFF WELL HE WAS DEAD ALREADY BUT I--

;;___;;

I will never wear your underwear again. --> oh myungsoo you FREAKING PRECIOUS THING

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mynichi January 24 2013, 11:04:26 UTC
OMG NO. It didn't make sense, I knew it. ;_;

Sungyeol wasn't dead, I promise. He was just gone. He just left. He didn't die. We didn't kill him off. Although I'm not very sure what kind of entity he was either. Lol.

And I tricked myself too, because this thing wasn't meant to end the way it did. It was just supposed to end when Sungyeol left but Nicci wanted it to end happily and I couldn't deny her that so. This happened. XD

Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope this did not disappoint. ;~; -Chichi

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mangafanxd January 25 2013, 03:46:44 UTC
awww no it was fine and made sense! well, you had like two stories within the one, but still.

ah...you're welcome~ XD not disappointed at all! <3

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twoomnag February 2 2013, 17:28:07 UTC
HYE!!!!just came across ur lj today..well, more like yesterday since it's already 1 hour pass midnight here and i actually found this around last evening but then i just save the page first then go watch some jdorama before coming back here..
Anyway, back to the story, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!
MyungYeol are just too sweet..>.< the ending is just soooo sweet!!!!!!!!(i cant exclaim enough here..haha..)
but one thing, what happened in the last page????why did yeollie left?!he left for where?!
ok, maybe that is 3 things and not 1..sorry..XPP
Looking forward to read the rest of ur MyungYeol fics!!!!!hehe..^.^
And sorry for this long comment..usually my 1st comments are long but uitwill become shorter and shorter for upcoming comments..heheh..

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mynichi February 3 2013, 00:43:25 UTC
Oh. Can we ask how you found our LJ? I was starting to think it was pretty much isolated or something. XD

Omg thank you for liking this thing, the ending wasn't supposed to be like this. Lol. Sungyeol left for ... somewhere. HAHAAH. Remember he could travel anywhere he liked? He just chose to travel for good and not come back to Myungsoo or idk. He just chose to leave because he sort of thought Myungsoo should have a life outside that house, and it wouldn't happen unless he was there. Orz.

Long comments are okay, and loved, and hogged, and okay. Thank your for commenting! You could drop comments on our other fics, too, and tell us what you think. :D

-Chichi

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twoomnag February 3 2013, 05:40:16 UTC
emm, i think it is kinda isolated..XPP actually i was bored with all the fics on asianfanfics so i was like just googling 'myungyeol fanfics' and i think i saw one of ur story that direct to me ur lj..

hehe..i read most of ur fics dy btw but too lazy to post comments on them all..*yes, i'm a lazy silent reader but i'll post comments on all ur fics i read from this point onwards..hehe..* but i really love ur "be mine, beautiful you" fic..looking forward for its continuation..^.^

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mynichi February 3 2013, 07:26:52 UTC
We have to do something about that. Lol. Thanks for reading our fics, sweetie. :)

Nicci already sent me the sixth chapter, but I'm too busy panicking about our book reports to do anything productive tbh. T^T But I'll work on it soon! Please anticipate it! :D

-Chichi

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prince_smutty February 21 2013, 15:18:49 UTC
Despite it being not planned to be incorporated at first, I think the idea of it being all a dream is what makes this fic so special. There are certain instances wherein your dreams can take you to a reality so vivid, confusing but almost tangible.
Myungyeol half-AU one-shots like this are totally rare. 'Totally enjoyed it. ^^

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mynichi February 23 2013, 07:01:29 UTC
Oh, thank you for thinking this thing is special. Lol. I've never really thought of its elements (like the dream etc) as anything but random ideas while washing the dishes OTL

But thank you for reading! :D

-Chichi

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mcts051129 April 4 2013, 05:24:15 UTC
This is one ridiculously awesome fic. It's really interesting to have Sungyeol coming out from a book and get the last page torn away(It reminds me of the K-drama Secret garden where the last page of the Mermaid was torn away as well) and GOD I almost feel how sad Myungsoo was.

So it's like parallel universe eh? Like how there are two realities...kinda got confused here.

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ext_1456317 July 13 2013, 21:44:12 UTC
I like it! ^^

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