Writing Exercise
I haven't posted one of my exercises in a while but here's one of them.
I knew it. I knew she had bewitched him, spelled him, enchanted him, something! There was no way he would just leave me for her, it’s impossible, he loves me not her. No one believes me though, they all think I’m just jealous but I have proof now so they have to believe me. I’ll make them see the truth and make him realize that letting me go was all just a big mistake. Everything will be alright again because she messed up and I saw her. She was making some sort of potion and I have the pictures to prove it. I’ll show them all tomorrow, they’ll realize just how wrong they were. After all, there was no possible reason for Josh to break up with me. We were so happy together and then she came and ruined it. Deceiving wench. And to think, I once considered her my friend, ha! She poisoned my boyfriend against me. She had the gall to think she hadn’t even done anything wrong! She somehow convinced him to keep it a secret. Probably because she knew I would figure it out when they told people. But I found out. When I confronted Josh he confirmed it and I knew he had to be under a spell. There’s no way he would want someone as plain and boring as her when he could have me. I can’t wait for tomorrow.
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When I showed everyone the pictures, they only laughed. I don’t understand it shows what she’s doing to him! What’s wrong with them? I’ll save him without them then. They can’t stop me, I have to do this. It’s not just for me, it’s for him too. I stomp over to show him what I saw; he’ll go agree with me, he has to. I show him the pictures as soon as I get over there and tell him what I know and what happened. He doesn’t even say anything, just shakes his head and starts to walk away! We’ll just see about that. I grab his arm and yank him into a kiss, it has to work. It’s my last hope and it’s the best way to break curses. All of the sudden he shoves me away and stares at me. This is it, I know it is. He’s going to denounce her as a harlot and take me back! Of course I’ll make him suffer for a little, but I will take him back in the end and-he’s walking away? She must have him deeper in her thrall than I thought; I have to think of something else. I will get him back and away from her if it’s the last thing I do.
I knew it. I knew she had bewitched him, spelled him, enchanted him, something! There was no way he would just leave me for her, it’s impossible, he loves me not her. No one believes me though, they all think I’m just jealous but I have proof now so they have to believe me. I’ll make them see the truth and make him realize that letting me go was all just a big mistake. Everything will be alright again because she messed up and I saw her. She was making some sort of potion and I have the pictures to prove it. I’ll show them all tomorrow, they’ll realize just how wrong they were. After all, there was no possible reason for Josh to break up with me. We were so happy together and then she came and ruined it. Deceiving wench. And to think, I once considered her my friend, ha! She poisoned my boyfriend against me. She had the gall to think she hadn’t even done anything wrong! She somehow convinced him to keep it a secret. Probably because she knew I would figure it out when they told people. But I found out. When I confronted Josh he confirmed it and I knew he had to be under a spell. There’s no way he would want someone as plain and boring as her when he could have me. I can’t wait for tomorrow.
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When I showed everyone the pictures, they only laughed. I don’t understand it shows what she’s doing to him! What’s wrong with them? I’ll save him without them then. They can’t stop me, I have to do this. It’s not just for me, it’s for him too. I stomp over to show him what I saw; he’ll go agree with me, he has to. I show him the pictures as soon as I get over there and tell him what I know and what happened. He doesn’t even say anything, just shakes his head and starts to walk away! We’ll just see about that. I grab his arm and yank him into a kiss, it has to work. It’s my last hope and it’s the best way to break curses. All of the sudden he shoves me away and stares at me. This is it, I know it is. He’s going to denounce her as a harlot and take me back! Of course I’ll make him suffer for a little, but I will take him back in the end and-he’s walking away? She must have him deeper in her thrall than I thought; I have to think of something else. I will get him back and away from her if it’s the last thing I do.