Crown of Thorns - (Chapter5/??) - AoixUruha, ReitaxRuki

[mypaperdoll1611]

Title: Crown of Thorns
Chapters: 05/??
Author: mypaperdoll1611 
Genre: Romance, Suspense
Warnings: Sex, Language, Incest
Rating: PG-13 (NC-17 in some chapters)
Pairing: AoixUruha (main), ReitaxRuki (side), KaixUruha, ByouxUruha
Summary: Aoi lost his father and his friends in a violent and cruel manner. To make-up for his insufficient place, he lived his life searching

Comments

[a9sims]

YOUR ENGLISH IS FINE, stop being so hard on yourself! Good stories don't need crazily flowery language...*laughs. Kai is insane in wanting to marry Uruha, but I kinda like this 'twisted-ness' of Kai's, *evil laughs. I enjoyed this as usual, what can I say, I absolutely adore this series so much.

[mypaperdoll1611]

Really? lol. I don't know. I just couldn't write it the way I want to. AHAHAHAHA! Anyways, I hope it's good. I'm glad that you still like this. More things to happen soon~

[rosswen91]

muuhaaawaaaaa :DD kai and uru are sooooo cute, finally they understand each other, i'm soooo happy :DD yess, and yesss!
and, i don't think your english is bad, find yourself a gppd online dictionary, and look for the words that you need, and read much, and write much... and, you'll see how you'll improve faster!!
keep up^^

[mypaperdoll1611]

Oh, thank you if that's the case. Yeah, maybe I should try that since I need more words to express my plot. HAHAHA! Thank you for your cheer! Yay ♥

[rosswen91]

hehe, your english is superb actually :) gppd^^ you understood this! you're good, good :D