Fic: What's Left Of Me 4/5

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Title: What's Left Of Me
Fandom: Merlin
Pairing: Merlin/Arthur
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Disclaimed.
Summary: Morgana's latest plan involves paying a man to lead Merlin and Arthur to the cave of a monster that is terrorising the locals who live nearby. But why is it so vital that Merlin accompanies Arthur on this journey? And what do his secrets have to do

Comments

[thepowerofme]

Oh wow that kiss! That KISS!!! It was so hesitant, tender and heart-renderingly beautiful! I love how obsessed you had Arthur be about Merlin being in love with him, without revealing why. It really seemed as though he was just grossly fascinated and came as a surprise to discover that Arthur had felt the same way for years. And yet thinking about it, and by the way he explains it, it fits beautifully! Not to mention, I LOVE what you've done about Gwen! How Arthur isn't sure whether he loves her or not, but cares a great deal for her. And I love how fixated Arthur is on Morgana being his sister...Basically, I just love EVERYTHING about this story!