Domesticity 6 by Myrna and featuring the talents of Josselin

[myrna1_2_3]

Another Domesticity fic. This one was a bit unwieldy so Josselin was kind enough to read it through and offer suggestions. And words. All much appreciated!

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[keeeleee]

"Oh Jesus," Justin whispered when they came up for air.

This single sentence sums up how I felt at the end of this fic: spun around, used, shocked, confused, exhausted - and loving every second of it. It's that point when you can't form a coherent sentence because there are no more words left to say. Getting to the end was like coming up for air after being immersed in Brian & Justin. And i'm ready to go back under...

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[sunshine_kin]

Hi, I have a slightly odd question for you. What does the OTP in your icon stand for?

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[myrna1_2_3]

OTP = One True Pairing.

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[myrna1_2_3]

I guess it took you on a roller coaster ride--or a New York cab ride!

Thanks for the kind words!

[tinyblondeone]

Wow. They fight so *loudly*!! Lovely snark and good-natured banter, and then !BAM! - fucking epic struggle. I love these fics.

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[myrna1_2_3]

Glad you like 'em! I enjoy visiting with the fella's as well!

[f1renze]

A totally unexpected direction that I absolutely LOVE.

Am feeling incoherent right now but I have to tell you my favorite parts:

You're fucking lucky that Rage is done by computer because if it was by hand the pages would be ruined with all your fuckin' tears,

OMG that is so good!

"You said it always goes away when I fuck you."

Perfect, Brian.

Finally he turned to Brian, and lifted his chin in his haughty way that always amused Brian. "I'll say it better," he vowed

What.a.character. ISOLOVEYOUJUSTIN.

Awesome job, girls.

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[myrna1_2_3]

You're fucking lucky that Rage is done by computer because if it was by hand the pages would be ruined with all your fuckin' tears,

This one is all Josselin's! I think I had Brian saying, "Come on, Baby, do not be sad," or something equally Brianesque. :p

Thanks for the comments! Glad you liked it!

[bluesmoke]

the things they talk about are so fucking not ordinary.

but i don't know-- i can see why this is entitled domesticity, because so many things we perceive as ordinary are mixed in with brian/justin interactions. the fights, the make-ups and the little body contacts.

*sighs* wonderful.

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[myrna1_2_3]

In so many fics, Brian (especially) is so...not regular. But in the end, I think he's a fairly normal guy, especially when he's not trying so hard to be...odd or over-the-top.

I like seeing Brian being fairly regular--going to work, cranky about dinner not being ready, looking in the mirror and thinking he looks hot...

Thanks for the comments!

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[weirdqafan]

That was...phenomenal doesn't even come close to describing it. You started it off a bit fluffy & then Wham! Hit us with the heavy stuff. You are good...to good, but don't ever stop writing!!

:-)
-Tina

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[myrna1_2_3]

Glad you liked it! Thanks!