TOWJWAGABI, Part 3

[myrna1_2_3]

Here's Part 3, in it entirety.

Comments

[needfire]

I just love Brian the bastard! I can see so clearly the absolute glee on his face as he delivered that last line. God I adore your work so much and this just hits me every time, not a word wasted. You make these characters real without losing their faults. I can see how safe Dan would be for Justin, but I look forward to the day when Brian gets him back. Why is that? Brian was a bastard, he was a complete sod. Dan is a good guy and he deserves a good life.
I suppose love and war ect ect.
Thank you for this, thank you for being the one to introduce me to this fandom. Thanks for the wonderful fiction that I read over and over..

[myrna1_2_3]

Thanks so much!

I just love Brian the bastard!

Hee! He is a bastard, isn't he? And yet still we love...

Oh my- just beautifull! And I don't have time to comment fully at the moment...

[viola69]

work calls. But dayum- LOVE this chapter as Justin's 2 lives start to collide and very cruel ending. :-P

And just adored beyond words the Brian & Justin scene- with none-so-subtle body-language at the office - followed up with their first 'real' conversation. Just... loved it.

Re: Oh my- just beautifull! And I don't have time to comment fully at the moment...

[myrna1_2_3]

Yay! So glad you're still enjoying it!

[loud99]

The more this story unfolds, the more I dislike Dan.
Not because he's with Justin, but because he's too...safe. He's too understanding, loving, caring, and just too perfect. It's nauseating. It's like I'm waiting for him to make the biggest fuck up in history, and when he does I can breathe a sigh of relief.

I'm just not feeling the J/D chemistry, but one little argument over coffee with Brian and emotions explode. It's scenes like this that I feel the story really comes to life.

But I do I have to say you're writing is amazing. Looking forward to more.

[myrna1_2_3]

Glad you're still with me!

Brian does bring a certain amount of ... intensity to the table, doesn't he?!

[ginaharold]

I love it!!! But you still must KILL Dan!!!

[quinn222]

I'm so glad I'm not the only one who doesn't like Dan. Love the story, can't wait to lose Dan.

[myrna1_2_3]

Awww, I'm feeling a little badly for Our Man Dan!

Thanks for the comments!

[quinn222]

lol, there is just something that feels 'off' to me. Almost as though neither one of them is really invested in the relationship or something. They just happened across each other just when each needed someone.

[qafhappy]

Oooohhhhh! Catty!Brian... he's gonna have to work hard to get Justin back.

But I have to say... you've made me love Dan, and I really don't want anything bad to happen to him. In fact, I can't believe I'm saying this.... but Justin should probably be with him!

::dodging the hail of stones::

::slapping myself silly::

[qafhappy]

(Realizing that quinn222, ginaharold, and loud99 are probably going to hunt me down now and hide the body).

[myrna1_2_3]

Come on! We need a little Dan Love to balance out all the Brian adoration!!

Thanks for the comments! I'm glad you like Dan!