Comments | myrna1_2_3: TOWJWAGABI, Part 8 (complete)

myrna1_2_3

TOWJWAGABI, Part 8 (complete)

Jun 06, 2004 19:19

Okay, I finished this part--the new part is Brian's POV. I didn't change anything from the teaser!

( The One Where Justin's With Another Guy, and Brian Interferes, Part 8 in its entirety )

Comments 69

rikkrp June 6 2004, 16:58:54 UTC

gah!

Oh the love

I feel love.

for you, for Brian, for Justin, for the show.

I'm re-energized.

and in tears.

gah!

myrna1_2_3 June 7 2004, 07:56:57 UTC

Aww, yay!

qafhappy June 6 2004, 16:59:09 UTC

Hello.... anyone there?

Ummmmnnn... I seem to find myself hanging here...

You are definitely the master at painting a beautiful picture, but dang! I'm left craving the next installment even more than the last...

...counting the days...minutes, even...

myrna1_2_3 June 7 2004, 07:57:57 UTC

I'm left craving the next installment

Glad you liked! My mind was a total blank on this part, but I'm much clearer on what happens in Part 9, so hopefully there won't be such a long gap before Part 9 is ready!

qafhappy June 7 2004, 09:08:29 UTC

*squeees delightedly*

*runs around the room, clapping hands*

*cats scatter*

Oh Goodness buckleys10 June 6 2004, 17:13:47 UTC

My first reaction is utter wonder at how with each part I am sucked in deeper and deeper to your world of Justin and Brian. Every scenario with them together, good and bad, are just pitch perfect. These are the people I want my beloved characters to be ( ... )

Re: Oh Goodness myrna1_2_3 June 7 2004, 08:13:51 UTC

Thanks so much for the comments!

My second reaction is that I want Brian to pick Justin up, throw him over his shoulder while screaming "please forgive me", and patch things up.

Hee! I'd love to see Justin's reaction to that! I think he'd come back to life pronto if Brian tried it!

Maybe it's a case of feeling so far removed from your actual emotions, that you seek out emotional support from someone who used to know your true reactions to situations

I think this is it exactly. Justin doesn't trust what he's feeling (or not feeling), and even if he doesn't like what Brian's saying, he can at least trust that Brian's speaking honestly to him.

Technical point, in the third sentence of Brian's POV there seems to be a word too many or one used in the wrong tense.

Thanks! I took out the extra word!

ta_wanda June 6 2004, 17:17:00 UTC

This story is like rich, creamy, expensive chocolate. It is to be savored.

Thank you.
Donna

myrna1_2_3 June 7 2004, 08:34:48 UTC

Thank you!

zilly525 June 6 2004, 17:21:30 UTC

I can't even tell you how much i really, really like this story.

Just gah, i wish i could put into words everything i think about it.

myrna1_2_3 June 7 2004, 09:16:20 UTC

Glad you're enjoying it!