TOWJWAGABI, Part 8 (complete)

Jun 06, 2004 19:19

Okay, I finished this part--the new part is Brian's POV. I didn't change anything from the teaser!

The One Where Justin's With Another Guy, and Brian Interferes, Part 8 in its entirety )

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cindybaby June 7 2004, 13:34:02 UTC
I can't tell you how thrilled I get when you post a new chapter...and today, I REALLY needed the treat!

Thank you!

As for the chapter, it was wonderful!

Sad...tormenting...and definitely left me craving more...but wonderful!

Cindy

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myrna1_2_3 July 20 2004, 07:11:34 UTC
Thanks! Sorry it's seventy-eleven months later that I acknowledge your comment!

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Sigh reboot_wlm June 10 2004, 09:13:58 UTC
You are killing me... It was so unexpected, the uncertainty and the tenderness. I hope you're not still stuck. Here's what I thought. I tacked the second part onto what I wrote last time.

http://www.whatlovemeans.com/myrna/jog8.html

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Re: Sigh myrna1_2_3 July 20 2004, 07:12:39 UTC
And another comment I'm a billion years late in acknowledging! Thanks so much for the feedback at WLM. It really, REALLY helps get me back on track after such a dry spell!

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on_the_ground June 12 2004, 10:51:20 UTC
I'm sooo loving this series... GREAT JOB!...feeling bad for Dan though... and I guess I shouldn't. I'm that weird.

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myrna1_2_3 July 20 2004, 07:12:50 UTC
Glad you're enjoying it!

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highd June 16 2004, 18:05:47 UTC
Myrna

I read this the day it came out and I wanted a good cry so I reread it and realized I didn't comment.

I have to tell you I read this the first time and it felt like and out of body float about my computer type of read.

I feel so much for Brian as he struggles to keep his Brian mystique up while listening to Justin talk about Dan.

He brushed the hair off Justin's forehead and leaned in to gently kiss the spot he cleared. Then he offered the only answer he could to Justin's question.

"I don't know," he whispered, and left without looking back.

its always the simple things you write that make me crazy or cry or rejoice.

(((((((myrna)))))))))

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myrna1_2_3 July 20 2004, 07:13:57 UTC
Awww, thanks! I feel like maybe, just maybe (I know, I know, don't talk about the no-hitter) I might finally be over my inability to finish this #()&%!) story!

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skyypyng June 29 2004, 09:45:22 UTC
Wow! Justin gets to experience Dan’s ‘maturity’ and ‘stabilizing influence’ first hand. Still the BIG QUESTION-how does Justin figure out what he wants which is Brian . I like this notbeingatotalshit!Brian.

After 411 and the intense moving of the Barcelona chair scene, whew!!! I am so ready for B/J actually interacting. Hope you can post soon :)

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myrna1_2_3 July 20 2004, 07:15:12 UTC
After 411 and the intense moving of the Barcelona chair scene

Ha! I haven't really watched QAF this season, but I pop in and out of the episode reviews and I remember how irritated most of the viewers were at the lack of B/J!

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