Oh. My. God! This had me grinning like a loon! A loon, I tell you!
There is so much I love I don't even know where to start! The mustard, asfgh! And the ending - genius!
It's hard to narrow it down but this may just be my fave bit - Luke shook his head in disbelief. “I cannot believe… you know most people don’t have to…I don’t even know where to… Who even does these…” Luke groped around trying to finish a sentence until he stopped suddenly and looked comically confused. “Wait,” he said. “You know where the dry cleaners is?”
i loved this so much! lucinda and reid are infinitely awesome together. and knowing how lame atwt is, i doubt they will ever meet on the show. but they are so compatible, it's scary...in the best way possible!
i LOL-ed my way through so many bits here.
grandmoney! slappy tickle! meeting the parents! mustard on shirt!
etc.
you write epics, you know?
as usual, i am waiting with bated breath for more. naturally :D
It was perfect and hysterical and I LOVED IT (I'm going to say that a lot, you should know).
That was so great and wonderfully written, I can't say I have anything smart-sounding to add here besides that I LOVE IT. The dialogue was amazing, spot on. It had this sounds so true to the show and its soap opera amazingness, but when it's, like, AMAZING.
Please promise me you will write more.
I loved this part:
Lucinda snorted at that, then took another sip of her cocktail. “If I’d wanted to be rid Noah I would have just dangled something shiny in front of his face, tossed it over my shoulder and told him to go fetch.”
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There is so much I love I don't even know where to start! The mustard, asfgh! And the ending - genius!
It's hard to narrow it down but this may just be my fave bit - Luke shook his head in disbelief. “I cannot believe… you know most people don’t have to…I don’t even know where to… Who even does these…” Luke groped around trying to finish a sentence until he stopped suddenly and looked comically confused. “Wait,” he said. “You know where the dry cleaners is?”
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And I adore how completely shamelessly Reid revels in his kept-man status. It's so Reid.
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i loved this so much! lucinda and reid are infinitely awesome together. and knowing how lame atwt is, i doubt they will ever meet on the show. but they are so compatible, it's scary...in the best way possible!
i LOL-ed my way through so many bits here.
grandmoney! slappy tickle! meeting the parents! mustard on shirt!
etc.
you write epics, you know?
as usual, i am waiting with bated breath for more. naturally :D
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I loved it. I adored it.
It was perfect and hysterical and I LOVED IT (I'm going to say that a lot, you should know).
That was so great and wonderfully written, I can't say I have anything smart-sounding to add here besides that I LOVE IT. The dialogue was amazing, spot on. It had this sounds so true to the show and its soap opera amazingness, but when it's, like, AMAZING.
Please promise me you will write more.
I loved this part:
Lucinda snorted at that, then took another sip of her cocktail. “If I’d wanted to be rid Noah I would have just dangled something shiny in front of his face, tossed it over my shoulder and told him to go fetch.”
This so made me night. Great job!
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