As the World Turns Fic #4: The One with the Proposal

May 05, 2010 00:19

Title: The One with the Proposal
Author: Myrna1_2_3
Fandom: As the World Turns
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid
Rating: R
Summary: This is the one with the proposal
Disclaimer: Not-not-mine
Author's Notes: When there are kids in a soap opera they can be any age regardless of when they were born, right?

The One with the Proposal )

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anonymous May 5 2010, 14:28:05 UTC
myrna1_2_3 May 5 2010, 15:00:15 UTC
Thanks!

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sixtieshairdo May 5 2010, 16:08:28 UTC
what impresses me the most about your writing is how you make it all flow so easily. the banter between luke and reid is completely clever yet believable and i love the way luke is a lot more mature and less whiny here (as compared to when he is with noah).

how could i resist ethan's adorkable questions about love and promises and brain surgery? max is freaking cute too, and that question he asked his mother about putting babies from bad ladies to good ladies cracked the heck out of me.

reid is very much like a child too, stealing cupcakes and eating junk food... maybe that's why luke is a lot more mature now! hehe.

ah you know i adore your work, each one is precious in its own way :D

you rock, babe. like, totally rock.

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myrna1_2_3 May 5 2010, 21:37:32 UTC
What an awesome note! Thank you so much for the kind words--I really appreciate it! So glad you liked the fic!

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jem_018 May 5 2010, 17:24:56 UTC
i absolutely adore this fic! *sigh* you are awesome! :D

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myrna1_2_3 May 5 2010, 21:37:42 UTC
Thank you so much!

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justinlovesart May 5 2010, 20:28:22 UTC
This was lovely.

I've always admired your ability to switch gears from hilarious banter to perfect romance so seamlessly, as it does at the end of this story.

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myrna1_2_3 May 5 2010, 21:37:56 UTC
Thank you for the nice note!

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gimlicakeshop May 5 2010, 23:41:02 UTC
I think I'm running out of ways to say how much I love your writing though I don't think I've said how much I appreciate that you write Reid into these domestic and romantic episodes in ways that seem true to his characteristic arrogance and abrasiveness. I also like how you write Luke as a person of great humor,openness, and care. And you do a great job of showing how Reid and Luke's personality traits complement, constellate, and tangle with one another - humorously and playfully. You seem to do all of this with ease, but I know it takes work. Really great work!

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myrna1_2_3 May 6 2010, 12:13:06 UTC
Your note was so lovely! Thank you so much for the kind words--I appreciate them so much!

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