As the World Turns Fic #4: The One with the Proposal

May 05, 2010 00:19

Title: The One with the Proposal
Author: Myrna1_2_3
Fandom: As the World Turns
Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid
Rating: R
Summary: This is the one with the proposal
Disclaimer: Not-not-mine
Author's Notes: When there are kids in a soap opera they can be any age regardless of when they were born, right?

The One with the Proposal )

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playingwithcake June 3 2010, 17:16:50 UTC
I don't know how I missed this when it was first posted... But I'm so glad I found it! This was wonderfully written, full of humour and snark and just plain awesomeness. The banter between the two kids and Luke and Reid was priceless. So freaking funny! And the way Reid proposed? Just seems sooooooooooo... them, ya know?

I loved it. Thank you for sharing!

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myrna1_2_3 June 4 2010, 22:02:03 UTC
Thank you so much for the nice note! Much appreciated!

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ltklo June 3 2010, 23:20:02 UTC
AMAZING!! So witty and clever ... and LOL funny! Yet so sweet and poignant too.

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myrna1_2_3 June 4 2010, 22:00:51 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know!

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aliciamasters June 4 2010, 03:41:02 UTC
I love how Reid gets his best ideas from eavesdropping. And the food stealing...priceless.

I feel like I'm spamming you with reviews, as I read one great story after another. I'm actually resenting how slow a typist I am, simply because I want to tell you how fabulous you are, but I also want to get to the next story, pronto, and see what happens next!

Reid explaining neurosurgery to the boys is priceless, but my actual favorite line?

As Luke was closing the door, he heard Max say, “Hey, Mom? Do you ever take babies out of bad ladies and put ‘em into good ladies?”

I also adored the explanation about Luke's and Reid's promise being like a promise to eat chocolate cake. Lovely analogy within an equally lovely story. Thanks so much!

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1faghag June 6 2010, 03:23:57 UTC


"Luke sighed. “I’m just going to go ahead and agree with you here, because whenever we discuss something as innocuous and almost entirely unsexual as a woman flirting, it inevitably segues into a discussion of your extensive sexual history and how grateful I should be that you selflessly fucked your way through countless hot gay losers so I wouldn’t have to.”

Reid grinned. “And again, for the second time tonight, you’re welcome.”

This was perfect & vintage Reid!! I love your mind!!!

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myrna1_2_3 June 7 2010, 12:16:47 UTC
Thank you kindly!

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maclabv June 14 2010, 22:48:48 UTC
OMG you're great!!! Reid and Luke are soooo in character. And I 'loved' Ethan and Max :) And Reid's way to propose... it was just soo him!!!! I LOVED it!!! great job!! (can you be a writer of atwt? please,please,please... lol)

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