Most of the
Secret Santa Fics made me sad. I don't want my darling Justin involved with any of those Brians, and I didn't find any of the Justins likable.
And alas, the fics pairing Justin with Ben showed a lack of integrity in both characters that I didn't care for.
I think Brian came off in several fics as weak and feckless and there's
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I say this like I have read any of the other fics.
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What I mean by that is, not one that I have read so far appeal to me, and I thought some of them were decidedly not well written, and that makes me fear (ever so slightly) that I'm one of those squeeish fangirls who squees and author just because she wrote it and not because it's good.
Again, I haven't read them all, and I am probably jumping the gun and making vast generalizations without all the facts. This was just my thought.
I did think of you as I was reading one of them: "No WONDER Myrna can't stand Brian. If this is how Brian is, I can't stand him either!"
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Maybe it's not that we're squeeish over one author or another so much as we've come to trust with some authors that the literal interpretation of the scene isn't all we're seeing. When we don't know the author, we don't make those additional leaps.
I remember being fairly surprised at some reader animosity toward Brian in I'd Swim the Seas when he brings a trick to the loft and purposefully fucks the guy so Justin will see then. Brian was an absolute shit to do that. And he did it because he was weak and because when he's scared he hits first and thinks later. But I knew as I wrote it that Justin was going to confront him and say, "Don't shit on me," and I knew Brian was going to agree to try not to shit on Justin so I was okay with that whole scene.
I lost some readers there who were like, Brian's a shit and Justin should walk away--period. The End!
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but I also adore Brian, which you do not, and I also think it's possible to love Justin and also love Brian and not do a disservice to either character
I would agree with all of these statements!
Still, I think Brian shitting on Justin as proof that he cares for him is a disservice to both characters!
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I think I know which one you wrote.
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I don't mean to assign fault at all! I can only attempt to explain why I didn't like the way the characters came off in the fics.
I think it's very accurate to assume that the closer a fic Brian is to the Brian portrayed on the show, the less I will like him.
I didn't mean to imply that Justin was a weakling in every single one of the fics. I do think he demurely accepts Brian's shitty behavior toward him in several of them, though, and I find that an unlikable trait in a character. But I also think skulking around with Ben is dishonorable and therefore weak as well, just weak in a different way.
I guess I'm shocked that you didn't like any of them.
You're only shocked because I usually don't post anything about any of the fics I read! :p
I'm those two grumpy Muppet guys! I really am!
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The writing itself was very good. It seemed crisp and clear and the description was nice without being wordy. This was definitely one of the better ones in the bunch. There was another Ben/Justin one that I liked as well, simply for the flow of the wording and the ease of dialogue.
I actually like it that you're speaking out about something you've read, since we never hear from you about other fic. I'm sorry that none of these fics had redeeming qualities in your eyes, because I think several of them were quite good, Silences included. But I respect the fact that it's your opinion, and will defend to the death your right to say it. :)
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the fics are well written. I could hear the voices of the characters and see the action as it took place. The stories flowed nicely and were crisp and clear. Some fics you can almost feel how the author belabored every word choice, every comma, every inch of the story and it's almost exhausting to get through the piece. When a fic flows easily, effortlessly, the read is much more enjoyable.
So- in the writing she found redeeming qualities , it was just the characterizations which she has a strong opinion on what she likes & dislikes-- and really no surprise there.
Still haven't read all of them- look forward to doing so- including &/or especially the Ben/Justin ones- even though in a logical-way I have to agree with Myrna's stance that Justin-Ben without a very long-build-up is a dis-service to both characters- yet... well, yet, it's a guilty-pleasure pairing for me.
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myrna's not afraid of speaking her opinion or standing her ground, which is what more people should do. myself included.
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myrna's not afraid of speaking her opinion or standing her ground, which is what more people should do. myself included.
Amen, and myself included, also. :-)
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