LJ Idol Exhibit B I Wake Up Strange

May 30, 2013 17:40

My fingers ache so much but I continue to claw with my broken fingernails into the ragged rocks of the temple steps. The Mayan ruins’ path seems almost a vertical climb, so narrow, so hot. The scorching sun is beating on my back and head causing tickling droplets of sweat to inch down my cheeks and spatter on the steps before me.

I don’t think I ( Read more... )

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roina_arwen June 3 2013, 05:12:30 UTC
Hahaha! This was a very clever pairing with your partner's post.

By the way, to add a link to hers in yours, just go to her post and click where it says "link" at the bottom, and you get this html:
http://adoptedwriter.livejournal.com/231886.html

You can add it either at the top or bottom of your post - just copy and paste it like you would to link your post into the topic thread. :)

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myrna_bird June 3 2013, 12:10:07 UTC
Thanks! Glad you were amused!
Thank you for the lesson on linking with another post. It makes sense now that you say it. I had used 'reply' and knew it wasn't quite right. I never knew what clicking on 'link' would do. Now I know! :)

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jem0000000 June 4 2013, 02:48:51 UTC
Wow, what a weird dream! I guess your arms were trying to tell you something in your sleep, with dreaming about things that were hard on them?

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myrna_bird June 4 2013, 22:48:15 UTC
That was my suspicion! Thanks for reading!

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halfshellvenus June 4 2013, 17:16:03 UTC
I started to wonder with the Mayan temple climb if this was a dream, because the unrelenting difficulty combined with "somehow must reach the top" is the kind of torment dreams inflict upon you!

I'd say that the water-skiing sounds like more fun, but I'm not a great swimmer either, and I'd be in the same boat as you!

Cute-- loosely intersected, but it was enough!

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myrna_bird June 4 2013, 22:51:35 UTC
Thank you.You are a clever girl! It's always fun for me to try a little fiction but I tried to make it accurate in that dreams do have some meaning to them. I wanted a sharp contrast ( working so hard vs up in the air) in the content because that is how my own dreams usually are. Thanks for your great comments.

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n3m3sis43 June 4 2013, 20:59:07 UTC
Hahaha... I was reading this and going, "Um, Myrna? Did you overdose on cold medicine or something?" Nice surprise ending. :)

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myrna_bird June 4 2013, 22:54:30 UTC
LOL. Someone had suggested margaritas when I was drafting my story but I don't drink alcohol so I stuck with something I know to get that Mexican connection. Thanksk for reading!:)

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kathrynrose June 4 2013, 23:40:08 UTC
LOL. I am eating a taco salad right this minute.

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myrna_bird June 5 2013, 01:05:52 UTC
Guess I must say, "Pleasant Dreams!" then. , haaha. Thanks for reading!

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