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myscribbles

LJ Idol Week 8

Dec 19, 2009 01:25

My first ever fiction entry, and the first one that none of my friends are online to read meep ( Read more... )

Comments 30

soundscool1 December 19 2009, 16:08:48 UTC

It really is hard to wrap your brain around, doing something like that to a child. Sorry I wasn't around yesterday. My laptop gave me a black screen when I tried to switch it on. I may disappear until after New year's, if it fails me completely.

myscribbles January 8 2010, 09:13:49 UTC

Ha it is after ny man Comment reply fail!!!!!

but you still love me yes?

kutiechick December 20 2009, 06:08:34 UTC

Wow. I cannot imagine how someone gets to the point where they can do this to another person - an innocent child...THEIR own child; but I thought that you captured it very well. It made me so sad for these two children and captivated me at the end.

I also liked your tie-in at the end with why you chose to go down this path.

Great job!

myscribbles January 8 2010, 09:14:38 UTC

I can never understand it either, and I honestly think people that do things like this are irredeemable.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Mags

mstrobel December 20 2009, 10:33:22 UTC

You write beautifully. Those were such sad stories, and I'm so glad to read that they were fictional for you. I also liked your end-note, it was perfect to show -why- you'd written those stories; why the prompt had made your mind go to them instead of to some other type of heinous behavior.

myscribbles January 8 2010, 09:15:39 UTC

You write beautifully.

This made me grin all day

Thank you so much, and im very glad you liked it as I was worried it was too depressing a piece.

Mags

mstrobel January 9 2010, 12:18:44 UTC

Sad yes, but still wonderfully written so it's the -good- kind of depressing read <3

pixiebelle December 20 2009, 18:17:46 UTC

So terribly sad. I don't understand how anyone could ever harm a child...I agree that those people are beyond salvation in many cases. My entry is about my sister's ex who was a terrible man and hurting his kids was a part of his daily life. It breaks my heart to think of kids feeling pain like that...

myscribbles January 8 2010, 09:16:49 UTC

No, me neither, it has always been a source of pain and confusion for me and yes totally beyond salvation :( it really does break your heart that people can hit kids like that.

Mags

kiwiria December 21 2009, 09:28:14 UTC

Great job on the post. Very poignant.

myscribbles January 8 2010, 09:17:03 UTC

Thank you so much