Wound like drowning

Jul 22, 2009 21:04

He lies first, says the swollen eye's from play-fighting. Look at me, she says, take your sunglasses off. When he does, he looks in the mirror, looks away, replaces the glasses. The eye is nearly swollen shut, she's seen, she blinks a thousand times for strength, focuses on traffic lights. What are you afraid of, he asks, and she says, I'm afraid ( Read more... )

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_______nuncora July 23 2009, 02:06:55 UTC
this one's sharp.

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mysneaker July 23 2009, 02:44:35 UTC
it cuts, for sure.
your book is coming soon.

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icecreamemperor July 23 2009, 05:12:56 UTC

The story passed me by a little but I really love the writing, so clean.

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