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mysocalledhell

Gift Fic: Midday Surprises

Sep 15, 2008 00:22

Title: Midday Surprises
Rating: NC-17 for sex
Characters/Pairings: Keigo/Cloud(Claude, whatever you want to call him ... the guy with the cool mimic ability ... he's Cloud in this)
Disclaimer: Not my characters, just my interpretation of them.
Words: 883
Summary: Keigo gets a surprise at lunch ... too bad it lasts long into his afternoon classes.
Notes: ( Read more... )

keigo, gift fic, 2metaldog, bleach, claude, keigo/cloud-claude, cloud

Comments 25

2metaldog September 15 2008, 11:40:55 UTC

*squeeeee* This was great! Thank you so much for writing it. *beams* I loved the little bit at the beginning about Cloud turning into a woman every now and again *snicker*. Pretty cool, too, with him doppling Keigo.

Thank you very much. You made me smile.

mysocalledhell September 15 2008, 15:01:47 UTC

*smiles* glad you liked it ... kept trying to figure out how to get them together for the first time and just couldn't come up with anything, but I kept getting the image of Keigo sitting in front of Keigo, so I ran with it. you're very welcome.

2metaldog September 15 2008, 15:07:29 UTC

It was pretty hot to mentally see them like that. I loved that Cloud was loosing concentration and flickering between himself and his Keigo image.

If I wanted to link this, can I? You have it locked....

mysocalledhell September 15 2008, 15:23:23 UTC

oh, yea ... forgot you had wanted to link you b-day stuff ... I'll unlock it and feel free to link away.

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liralen September 15 2008, 15:09:07 UTC

You did an amazing job. Cloud is probably one of my least favorite characters in the whole series. *laughs* But you did a great job with them!!

I really do like the doppled Keigo at the beginning and the fact that Keigo is a smart highschooler with the condom and all. Very hot and funny and sweet at the end with Cloud showing he really is just one of the artificial souls, wanting to please, but not quite all *there*... so to speak, on what he should or shouldn't be doing.

Nice work!!

mysocalledhell September 15 2008, 15:28:29 UTC

yea ... I read Cloud and I'm just like ... what the hell am I supposed to do with this?????!?!?!?! but trying to think about sex all day while at work was a new experience ... especially with those two. glad you enjoyed it.

liralen September 15 2008, 16:14:37 UTC

*laughs* That would be quite the experience.

truly_wished September 16 2008, 03:41:52 UTC

That is excellent! Captured the awkwardness of sex at that age, no matter how often or rarely you do it.

mysocalledhell September 16 2008, 03:54:45 UTC

lol ... thanx ... glad you liked it.