Title Among The Wreckage - assorted snippets
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Warnings: Yaoi, NSFW towards the end
Characters/couples: Lavi/Allen
Rating: G to NC-17
Word Count: 1800
Notes: I've finally resigned to the fact that I'm probably not going to finish writing this fic in its entirety. It's been sitting on my hard drive since January, mostly untouched,
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What said keyboardsmash means, when translated, is that as soon as I'm halfway coherent again, I'll review yout story properly. Right now I'm dead on my feet, but.
After writing you, I won't be able to be lazy and shy and not leave a review tomorrow. Hah, tricked myself again, here >D
jsyk-- I want to take your story by the hand and walk with it over endless flower fields. Your story and your Omi icon, that is~
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I love the way you manage to get inside Lavi's head, and to take me along for the ride, as well as at the same time be able to show so much of Allen's mind to. You say that these are mere drabbles meant to have been part of a longer story, however, to me they weave together and creates a story in their own right. I loved reading this, and that last part was like a punch in the gut, so powerful and full of emotion, especially the very last line. Well done, I'm still reeling a bit here. Love it!
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