My poem..

Feb 09, 2005 21:41

My day was pretty daydream-like today.

Reminds me of these Smiths' lyrics:

And I'm not happy and I'm not sad...

That's how I felt today..hard to describe..

I still like ______. Unfortunately, she does not like me...ahh, bittersweet unrequited love is, no?

Here is a lame line of verse I wrote earlier in Math class:\

I sail a gray and spindrift ( Read more... )

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hannah_licious February 12 2005, 23:52:27 UTC
Wow...you are incredibly handsome.

That poem is absolutely heartwrenching.

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sweetembrace_ February 15 2005, 00:48:52 UTC
Yeah, your poem is really good. I like how you use more vocabulary and bigger words to describe something. It shows that you have a great deal of intelligence.

And, you're looking great, just like in every picture. Do you take the pictures of you by yourself?

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myspilledcanvas February 15 2005, 04:28:18 UTC
Yeah, I usually take some...but...sometimes family/friends take them. :)

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