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[mystal]

Ren Riemann bowed modestly as the audience roared with heartfelt appreciation at her phenomenal performance as Catherine in David Auburn’s play, Proof. She could hear the exhilaration in the room but could not soak it in because her mind was weighed down with self-doubts. As fragile as she could appear to be, as great of a mathematician

Comments

[elixia]

DUDE, that's so cool! I love how proof and pudding frame the story. :)

[mystal]

Thanks! :3

"The proof is in the pudding" *is* a familiar saying, right? I hope the person who reads my essay isn't like whaaaa

oh, and what if they haven't read/seen Proof? Will it still make sense?

[elixia]

"Proof" is set in Chicago. They'd have to live under rocks to not be familiar with it.

[mystal]

hahaha true...sank you for your feedback!

[elixia]

Oh, and I should add--

You will totally get in (99.9% guaranteed!). Your personality just fits with the spirit of the school.

AHH, I'm so excited for you! ♥

[superchicken29]

Very nice! I like the essay question. I wish all schools would do fun questions like that. xD

[cd4676]

Wow.
All I have to say is good luck at UChic!