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iwant2believe2 September 24 2006, 04:02:22 UTC
verryy interesting! i'm a pre-med student too and i found this to be right on track with whats true. Maybe in your second paragraph you could put in an example of a mistake House/ER/Grey's Anatomy made and what is really true. What year are you? I'm just a lowely first year who can only dream about med school (not looking forward to the MCAT....) but excellent second draft!

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iwant2believe2 September 24 2006, 04:03:18 UTC
ah crap i ment your third paragraph to put the example...sorry about that!

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mystery_chick25 September 24 2006, 04:09:43 UTC
lol i'm in first year too. lol. and yes I should do that. Thanks. :)

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kaecla September 24 2006, 04:28:53 UTC
Very interesting and well written article! Just a few little grammar mistakes that I thought you’d want to know about. (I’m a little obsessive…)

My daily rendezvous with House fans on livejournal allows me to say with confidence that I am not alone in my obsession.
Livejournal should be capitalized.

I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as it does on Grey’s Anatomy but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real.

I’m pretty sure it should be:
I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as they do on Grey’s Anatomy, but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real.
But no guarantees.

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mystery_chick25 September 24 2006, 04:48:35 UTC
YAY! thank you! I love people who correct grammar for me! (I Suck at grammar with a captical S ;) ) and thanks :)

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dumbadum September 24 2006, 04:43:22 UTC
Hey, it's pretty good! Did you write the for the Gazette?

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mystery_chick25 September 24 2006, 04:49:36 UTC
no, pre med society. Am running for one of the writing positions for their newsletter

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dumbadum September 24 2006, 06:05:15 UTC
cool :D I hope you get it :D:D

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tuulia_ September 24 2006, 06:07:26 UTC
Good job! It's a pleasure to read through, you're a good writer :)

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anonymous September 26 2006, 02:52:10 UTC
yea. what's up wit the writing-ness?

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mystery_chick25 September 26 2006, 18:46:43 UTC
if you read my reply to yin, you'd know! :P

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