verryy interesting! i'm a pre-med student too and i found this to be right on track with whats true. Maybe in your second paragraph you could put in an example of a mistake House/ER/Grey's Anatomy made and what is really true. What year are you? I'm just a lowely first year who can only dream about med school (not looking forward to the MCAT....) but excellent second draft!
Very interesting and well written article! Just a few little grammar mistakes that I thought you’d want to know about. (I’m a little obsessive…)
My daily rendezvous with House fans on livejournal allows me to say with confidence that I am not alone in my obsession. Livejournal should be capitalized.
I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as it does on Grey’s Anatomy but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real.
I’m pretty sure it should be: I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as they do on Grey’s Anatomy, but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real. But no guarantees.
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My daily rendezvous with House fans on livejournal allows me to say with confidence that I am not alone in my obsession.
Livejournal should be capitalized.
I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as it does on Grey’s Anatomy but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real.
I’m pretty sure it should be:
I can’t say for sure if love triangles actually happen to doctors as they do on Grey’s Anatomy, but I do know that a sure way to find out is to study hard, go to medical school and experience everything for real.
But no guarantees.
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