All the Little Things and the Big One

Mar 17, 2011 21:54



He was wow.

He made her lose it. For once, her brain failed her. And it was all because a mix of genetics, charm and some gym time. He humbled her with a smile. Sure, she borderline schemed him. But the fact remained that in those few moments, he robbed her of her thoughts. She felt like just another fan girl. Her fingers twitch with the ( Read more... )

chloe, fanfiction, oliver, season 9, season 10, oneshot

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iluvaqt March 18 2011, 02:02:42 UTC
Love the insights you drew. And loved that it was from both their perspectives but really I think I enjoyed Oliver's the most.

Especially the impression she left him with when she revealed how much she knew about them.

//if this took her one step closer to being in his corner too, then that was just a bonus. // Favorite thought. It was the beginning for him, and them ;)

Also about hurting each other. The ones who know you the best are the ones who can hurt you the most. Too true.

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serafina19 March 18 2011, 02:12:28 UTC
Wow! *chuckle* It was the first thing I thought of when I finished this... nothing to do with the 'wow'ing in Reunion I swear.

The progression of this is really beautiful and I think you made the right decision of drabbles vs. one-shots. Great work!

(I'm not any better when it comes to homework-doing either... I should be studying but I don't have school tomorrow, so I'm multitasking between writing and watching hockey)

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lifes_not_long March 18 2011, 03:01:28 UTC
OUR OTP IS CANON! Atleast i'm not the only one whose been shouting it. LOVED THIS, sweetie. I especially liked the paragraph about the make up. I've always loved Chloe for her simplicity in that department.

They were married. In it for the long haul. Forever. Such a simple line, but I adore it!

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renka23 March 18 2011, 03:24:09 UTC
I love how you wrote everything! The way you captured Oliver's insights is beautiful. :)

DAMN RIGHT, OUR OTP IS CANON! MARRIED. :>

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sxymami0909 March 18 2011, 03:52:55 UTC
This was really amazing hun! One of my faovrite! :)

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