All the Little Things and the Big One

Mar 17, 2011 21:54



He was wow.

He made her lose it. For once, her brain failed her. And it was all because a mix of genetics, charm and some gym time. He humbled her with a smile. Sure, she borderline schemed him. But the fact remained that in those few moments, he robbed her of her thoughts. She felt like just another fan girl. Her fingers twitch with the ( Read more... )

chloe, fanfiction, oliver, season 9, season 10, oneshot

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dreammaker101 October 22 2015, 14:28:58 UTC
This one-shot is so beautiful and insightful.

"And she could not help but remember the Oliver he was before. His coping mechanism was booze and women, usually mixed together in a kaleidoscope of intoxication. She waited for the news to come of the return of the playboy billionaire. But instead she got the news of the identity of Green Arrow. In some ways, this was a thousand times worse but in others it was so much better."

Especially love this passage. This is a refreshing take on Chloe's reaction to the news. As much as Chloe had grown to known Ollie, as much as she loved him, and as much as she knew that her leaving would affect him, their new relationship still left room for doubt. With just a few words, you established that to Chloe, Ollie's revelation to the world -- irrevocably changing his life, running afoul of everything they and other heroes worked for and endangering his life and their mission -- was a genuine declaration of love that she was finally accepting.

Thanks for all the amazing Chlollie drabbles and one-

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